I don't even want to mention about the whole nightmare of a fantasy this story is, whoever wrote this is a person inexperienced and thinks the female body is a doll. Imagine being sex crazed but not even being well informed on how to do act?
First and foremost, what irritated me the most is the anal sex from chapter 10. What they did is physically dangerous because you can't just expect to a big dick to go in with no issues whatsoever in a tight hole? I'm complaining because it's the lack of knowledge that makes th scenes less enticing. It's dangerous and the prep time for anal sex is actually quite sexy, it's takes a lot of time (For most people) and it's the long sexual foreplay that makes anal sex really hot.
Second, her first time was not treated special at all. They just went in and fucked her with their dicks, with little foreplay. Not to mention they planned the whole thing, made her and her brother get drunk, stripped her naked while she was unconscious and everything about it is just wrong and written so poorly. First times should be sexily frustrating because it takes a certain amount of gentleness while containing your hunger, and that just isn't it with her. No way they're trying to write a narrative where they like her or they're head over heels over her, I've read a couple of narratives like this and the difference is that those stories actually makes you convinced those guys like rhe FL romantically besides sexually, they'll take their time and even ask for consent properly. If I were to describe this story, it's like someone was forced ro write a sex story and the person had no personal experiences themselves.
Fr gurl, I feel uncomfortable reading this? something about is not giving until I read ur comment
Totally agree, the scenes are not well written at all. And her ahego faces are not expressive enough, needs better illustration. For the story, I doubted the hot guys at some points for having ulterior motives and that there might be a plot twist or toxic relationship, but turns out it's just poorly written, so yeah the writer couldn't convince us with the love part.
I'm so weak, Keung is adorably small. He's especially cute in this chapter, his tiny little self drawn so cutely next to the big branch ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE, I NEED A PLUSH OF HIM ASAP
ugh, maybe it's because im lonely and touch starved but man, this is just so- SO NICE.
breeding kink, intimate sex, self-control, and many more, UGHHHHHSJDJDIDBD I WANT IT BAD
Yasssss same bro ┗( T﹏T )┛
LAILA AND CAMILLA'S STORY ARE MORE HEART TUGGING THAN THE MLS, don't get me wrong, I love Camilla's relationship with her blonde brother but other than that, the MLs are just kind of there while Laila and Camilla's relationship actually has genuine progress. I loved that they didn't make Laila the FL that goes secretly evil, I love that she remained as a sweet and kind person. Absolutely eating up their friendship because it's so wholesome
I read a lot of these kind of stories and the main character are always the same, they have a good qualities but they don't feel like fleshed out characters. Our MC in this story though? She has good qualities + good character. She feels real, I like that we see her get angry, see her working hard, see her put in the physical and mental work to get a long well with Master Firis. HER DIALOGUES? SHE SPEAKS NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH. It's how she doesn't even live a long life but is more wise than a Magicians that has lived long. I love her so much, rooting for her and Master Firis!!!
such a small guy with a lot of audacity, though he has a lot of care for others around him, like the wolf employees and even the hamster guy! sejun is teaching him well and also THEY HAVE A SQUIDDD THEY'RE GOING TO ENJOY THAT ONE FOR SURE
Hyun is a MC worth rooting for because although his exterior self seems cold, he cares not only for the members but also the people his working with like the team leader and the director plus I love how he's also learning along the way. Since he has always worked solo before he died, I love seeing him learn to be in a team and that they're here to uplift one another! Let's go BEST BOYZ!!!
I usually don't comment but man, this manga is like a freshwater in the ocean, it's different. I like that it focuses on the hardships a majority of idols goes through irl without it being focused on sex (I've read too many idol mangas that always showed sexual acts/favours as one of the things some idols go through) but in this story? It shows the desperation, the mental capability, quick thinking, and working smart that an idol goes through to make their dreams into reality. I love the members, I love Hyun our bold chick, and I love that it's spooky and makes me nervous and scared for the characters I like. GREAT STORY, CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MORE CHAPTERS
I also love how it shows the lengths that idols will fo through to make their dreams come true and that the villains arent just born ass dicks
I think the last few chapters about Mincheol is actually Haesoo closing that chapter of theirs. Reminiscing one last time about their youthful love and finally making space for something new (THE ML!!) Also, I love that she's the one who initiates her first kiss (Though it's too similar of the kiss she first shared with Mincheol )