effort does not warrant praise if it doesnt even 1. make sense or 2. look good pick one or the other (or ideally both), not both and maybe you dont have to worry about negative comments
and they grow so much... i'm so happy for them. and he looks so cool working! i literally gasped at his hair being longer in the first scene, he's so pretty
either old man yaoi or (i hope not) love rival
hoping for old man yaoi </3