
I’ve only read the first 10 chapters, but so far it feels like it’s moving in a really rapid pace. Like, there’s no time to let anything stick because they immediately move on to the next scene. Plus so far the MC feels like..a blank wall? If that makes sense? Like, I don’t know, he’s just not that interesting and doesn’t really have a personality. Like, it’s not bad, but not good either. Def mid.

Ok wait, so I’m on chap 64 so far, but I’ve seen some scenes come up that I don’t remember reading before…like when he mentions the second encounter with Ash, and how he’s like Alice (idek who that is lol) plus, I didn’t figure who his dad was u til a few chapters after even though characters like that are usually introduced to us. So am I missing something? Did this have a previous story, or should I wait a few more chapters for them to explain?
LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AFTER ALL THAT EDGING!!!! IT WAS SO SO WORTH IT!, HO,Y SHITTTTT