beta
I’ve only read the first 10 chapters, but so far it feels like it’s moving in a really rapid pace. Like, there’s no time to let anything stick because they immediately move on to the next scene. Plus so far the MC feels like..a blank wall? If that makes sense? Like, I don’t know, he’s just not that interesting and doesn’t really have a personality. Like, it’s not bad, but not good either. Def mid.
LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AFTER ALL THAT EDGING!!!! IT WAS SO SO WORTH IT!, HO,Y SHITTTTT