beta
umm... this was kinda bad. The seme's unnecessary comments about the uke's body and weight, the uke's naivety or should i just say stupidity, the translations which; to me, were barely readable or maybe it was just the dialogue idk, plus the unsatisfactory ending. To me this just wasn't....good. the only good thing I can say about this was the sex scenes but even that felt like it wasn't long enough idk how to explain it lol.σ(￣∇￣;)