smut was so I hope to see more from this creator, but man do I hope they work on their writing skills or get an (/or better) editor because all the drama focused on the wrong things.
like yeah, there's trust issues because of the lie that set things in motion, but it would have been so much more satisfying to see them work through the self-worth issues the both of them had, and delve into taewoong's image issues and background a lot more. sooo much more could have been done with the prejudices and pressures they both faced that made competition and "coming in 1st" so important for dojin and the inescurity arising from taewoong's need to be high-achieving, successful and well-adjusted. things could've been real deep and thoughtful if the creator has focused on that instead of petty relationship/love competitor drama, but hey, I like my characters' interiority explored in more than just the physical sense.
also, taewoong had a ton of bottom potential. it's great that dojin liked getting railed and prefers it, but we could share the love some! switch occasionally, as a treat!
Not the time, place, or occasion, but did anyone else see the potential between jooyung and his fiancée's brother? As in, the fiancée's brother seemed interested in him. I'd like to see it go somewhere, and I think this pushes things in that direction maybe.
wow was that scene well done. it's refreshing(?) in a way to see rape scenes being portrayed so emotionally desperate like this. it's usually all those stupid possessive rape bs that's distasteful even for someone like me who tolerates/likes non-con.
like rape/SA is not being used for some cheap plot. in fact, it's the result of fked up lil bro's character development.
now that is how you write characters. i already can't wait for this author's next work, hope they have a MC like lil bro here, or maybe even give us a sequel on his story and redemption.