Every couple chapters it's just random ass r@pe while the characters r being stupid but we're supposed to think of em as mafia masterminds lol.
This story isn't wholesome or cute. It's two immature people who shouldn't have been together getting together in a toxic relationship that only lasted bc of a non-consentual accidental pregnancy. And then all of their trauma/health issues evaporate in a span of a couple months for plot convience, so they can be together one more time after breaking up multiple times.
They should have been dating CPTSD therapy. It may look nice compared to psychological torture levels of abusive pairings that are common in other stories of this genre but it's still ridiculous.
The timeline of the story, esp the end (and sides) is just whack and the sex scenes are very uninspired.
What crap are you even writing ....0 comprehension skill
Says you lol. Y'all have broken taste buds but that doesn't make the trash you love great
Like it's funny you say I lack comprehension but you can't even understand what I wrote and actually argue how I'm wrong instead of resulting to petty insults like some middle schooler ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Lmao it's okay you were born dumb garbage and your parents don't love you :*
Lmaooo 0 comprehension skills go to a doctor maybe he can fix you
Said the boku academia freak lmaooo shut up you garbage pls and sont ever comment again with your 0 comprehension skill
ngl, this line was cringe
no offense tho
Can't fault little kids for behavioural issues. Hopefully their caregivers step in bc OP is not gonna make it through highschool without a sea of tears (￣∇￣")
Whatever makes you sleep the night kid xd
I'm surprised Mangago let's people block someone, but still tag them and reply to their message while you no longer have the option.
Truly some middle school behaviour
Sorry but I can't totally agree with you about the pace...
And one of the things I like about the story is that any of them are 'perfect'.
You say is a toxic relationship and yes, the agreement at the beginnig wasn't bc of love or anything like that... but that changes with time in this story.
You say they recover too fast.
However, they spent months as friends with benefits first without relaising their own feelings in Cheon-oh's case and with fear of telling them and loosing what thay had at the moment in Yi-Rim's. Then Cheon-Oh relaised but neither of them said what they feel until Yi-Rim gets admitted to the hospital, they had sex bc Cheon-Oh's rut arrive suddenly and Yi-Rim disappear.
When Yi-rim go to OB he is 2 months pregnant and Cheon doens't find him immediately. And even when they get together, Cheon wass taking pills for months before Yi-Rim discovers it and disappear again... And when Yuho goes to tell Yi-Rim that Cheon is going back to swimm he said the competition is in 3 months, time Cheon has to train without pills, with omegas...
So I'd say it takes them at least a year to get there since they met.
Did you calculate more or less that period of time? Do you still find it was rushed?
I respect your opinion: You don't like the story.
Please, respect that others might like it.
slayyed
Is this story worth it? I dislike what could be called useless drama, it sounds like the uke was running from him..
Thank you for such a well thought out reply.
Personally I just couldn't get over how childish the relationship was but I am very harsh on weak relationships with unplanned children. Also Yi-Rim endangering himself and consequently his baby because he's neglecting himself is（￣へ￣）
I could wave away the timeline feeling rushed aside the less than 3 month "recovery" for Cheon-Oh. He has struggled for years and he wasn't always using the smell blocking tablets. From my understanding of the comic they were a last resort when all the different therapies failed, so his C-PTSD trauma response going away in 3 months because Yi-Rim's love is conditional rubs me the wrong way from multiple angles.
Perhaps I would have felt more positive about the exact same timeline if the comic didn't leave most developments for the background, though.
Uke ghosts his lover twice. There's a lot of unnecessary drama ╥﹏╥
ahh, looks like ill be leaving this one alone then.. do you know any other stories with kids involved that isnt toxic?
I know trauma can make people maladapt but you need to have some weird "I'm an empath" thinking to empathise and side with that Grapist, emotionally abusive, manipulative, guiltrupping MURDERY BRAT.
The comic is 90% this disgusting relationship swiftly crashing down into more levels of toxicity than fathomable and then some plit thrown in in the end so you don't throw it all back up.
Therapy does not exist in that universe and now I want therapy for reading this and seing how much some people unironically like and romanticise this. The comic is psychological horror but not by design because the Author doesn't actually acknowledge the disaster they wrote as what it is.(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Wow babe. No one is romanticizing this, not even the Author. The author themselves said that their trauma has caused them to be so toxic, they literally said that if they were to not experience the trauma they did they wouldn't have gone down this path. They would've probably loved each other better. No one is saying they want this or how cute is this, they're saying the writing is good, bc it objectively is, the author has written a beautifully chaotic mess of toxicity. The author shows the cause and effect of just people, people who will go to whatever lengths to protect the things that they want. People who wil delude themselves into being loved. This story perfectly portrays that and more. It's a psychological crime. It's not a romance
It's first and foremost pornography which does not work with psychological crime.
And there WERE literally comments simping for this mentally unstable abusive blonde while hating on a SA victim. Just because you don't want a relationship like that doesn't mean there aren't people who need therapy instead of reading this mess here.
Would you say killing stalking is a romantization? I surely didn't think so
You need to understand , they are the exception, not the rule, it's always the fucked up people who end up commenting the most, the rest of us just read our stuff and go, sometimes leaving a comment for others that might read it. It's rare to see any sane comments as the top comments. This website is a breeding ground for fucked up people. I'm also sure that the vast majority of people romanticizing is arent even queer in any way. Straight people that read bl tend to veiw any queer characters in media more as objects than people and their worst inhibitions come out. Fujoshi's are fucked up, but they are not the rule. The Author's word is what you should look at, but if this is not to your taste that's fine too. Me personally, I enjoy a good fucked up story, theyre messy and interesting, but they're just that. A story. Fiction. And more people should realize that.
No, but you do know there was huge amounts of people romantising it and it was a famous "romance" sadly.
But I think I've had enough, this just isn't the story that captivated me anymore, quite a shame.
It doesn't sound like it will get better and the plot will stray further away from what made it good in the first place.
Y'all kinda scary with some of those... questionable comments doe :"dd
Totally agree with you, I never would have thought that the plot would become this way lmao, but I cant help but to want to stick around for Paul... :T Might also drop this in the future if things go too south
Hm...I didn't read the whole novel, just the last few chapters, and it's worth staying, or at least come back at a later point.
[PS: Before anyone asks, I don't know, where I read the novel...someone posted a link a few weeks back.]
"I already fucked your son"
Like BrO, you don't say that to someone's father
But I rather him say that than to keep letting the father yap about meeting other omegas and shii
"I fucked your son like an animal for an entire week" is the proper translation xD