i think (and i'm not defending j.j.'s behavior whatsoever because wtf was that) the author was trying to show us how leo has been treating(?) j.j. in a sense that if we rewind to the first chapter of them having sex and it was just leo demanding things from j.j. and leaving him with a boner and basically leo just having sex for his *own* satisfaction.
Yeah you're right actually. I can see how that'd make sense. Just that JJ shouldn't become what he hated.
oh totally. i think we all had a general idea of where the story was going and i honestly expected this to some extent but not *this* bad.
Yeah totally, I was expecting "someone" to finally lose their shit and snap too oops. But yup, no matter who does it, it's bad.
thats actually kinda makes sense
lol was i the only one who thought within the first few chapters not to take the plot of this seriously?
this feels a little too draggy. we're 60+ chapters in and we, as readers, aren't really learning anything new. we know that the ml is cray cray and it just feels like we're going nowhere with the plot (especially with how things are going in the raws). it feels like we're getting somewhere but nowhere at the same time. as they say when it comes to slow burn, there is a fine line between sweet pining and frustrating stagnation.
stories with yandere mls usually keep me engaged like "the beast must die" or even "checkmate" (and before anyone says maybe it's because of the lack of smut, i did not read the mature version of checkmate). the ml is as predictable as you can get with a yandere and the mc is well also your typical poor mc. the characters feel flat and imo.
c'mon. atp, you should've tried to become better than him to protect yourself. fuck your brother.
there are only 13 chapters left, i think.
Wait in the entire story or…???
Of the main story in the novel. There are 3 side stories in the novel as well.
i don't really think this backstory has shown us anything new lol
yeah, agreed.
yes yes yes