
i'm shocked that i didn't up liking this. i for sure thought i would.
edit: after reading a comment i guess i kinda understood why i didn't like this - it was the lack of chemistry. maybe it was the pacing(?) it felt like the five and half chapters weren't used effectively. idk i guess because i wanted to like this but ended up not liking it made me sad.
That felt like a waste of time reading. It's so... bland idk what else to say. There's no tension, the characters don't have any charisma, the ml's obsession makes no sense (i mean this like: he's possessive but doesn't do anything about it. He keeps mentioning how he wants mc to be happy in a world he curates for him but we really don't see him doing anything of the sort. This could've been an optional trait but he's not unapologetic enough about his supposed obsession. He makes no sense as a character), the writing isn't as compelling as other stories with the same plot or character dynamics (think: love jinx, opposites attract, i'll even throw the third ending here)