Okay it made giggle a little the first time but not when wanting sperm is his whole personality like that's just weirdo behavior like freaky weird and i get it's not realistic and stuff but still.... And its like how can you drag out joke to so many chapters and the face he makes I'm cringing the sex scene where he was licking his hand and staring in to his soul I screamed
EVERYONE AROUND IS FREAK I DID NOT TRUST THE MOTHER IN LAW HER EXPRESSION LOOKED MORE CRAZY THAN SHOCKED
Also do not let the other duke in her house i feel like he is the ultimate freak like the best thing to happen is probably them not meeting
If the Authors Goal is to make the female lead/main character super dislikeable then it's working for me because i hate seeing her casually abuse and exploits other people being like "I got to stay strong for my daughter" like alright girl your child is poor and used to be abused i don't think she will like hearing about how you exploit and abuse people in the lower class （￣へ￣）
Idk who the first or second ML so I'm just assuming black haired guy is the first male lead. (Long ass thread there are probably a lot of misspellings)
I'm tearing up, MC has such sad back story and then gets taken advantage off getting groomed by the red haired side character, the black haired ML does the same too but more on emotional deep level love bombing him the Mc knows it's not true he's first to show him love like that he had nobody.
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ML reeks of groomer with the way he talks and acts, i got the biggest ick when said "don't make me repeat twice" or when he gave the mc wine instead of water cause being in someone's house alone drunk i though he was gonna get raped.
Detail of him being rich and handsome i like since it shows power inbalance, Mc also said he didn't feel relieved when he payed of his debt but more heavier weight on his chest, also can we normalize handsome≠good
Like everyone excepts a bad person to look "ugly" unconventional when litteraly anyone can be bad no matter how they look, just some attractive people get the privilege of getting away with it and some unattractive people get accused of being pervs for looking the wrong way at person.
Lmao few day's later i realize how bad i wrote 3 dislikes deserved
I finished at 5:34 am
There are some questionable route's
Esspecially the bathroom scene the pages before reading the chapters screaming and i was like no way it's gonna include incest
Also idk but i get uncomfortable when the main character is like " I'm older then you" cause is he's probably tripple thier he was grown watching them grow up then him developing some or any kind of feelings for them is Lowkey wierd... Like imagen he died at 25 years old +16 he's already 41 or even if he was like young like 18 he'd be 31 after 16 years
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Bro I love this so far i need a break from toxic thing's and need some cute wholesomeness also I'm wanna gag at the idea the mc is a adult reincarnated as child and still has that adult mentality falling in love but I'm not sure if the ever mentioned that I'll have to reread but for now I'm assuming he's a minor
The story is stereotypical but you're doing good, the art is giving,idc what y'all say litteraly nobody asked for you negative opinion and litteraly when does everybody all of the sudden become a professional art critic, strong author I'll it this story up.
Lmao I'm not even surprised they're both insane i don't know why everyone is saying oh i like the brunet more or oh i like the white haired more as if one of them is innocent (no hate just opinion be delulu all you want) but they're both bad just in different font both are rapist and in someway being obsessed or through sex they'll kill you
Both bad in different fonts lmafo
Lmao after reading I'm 100% convinced it's bad translation and not me but plot kept me going till chapter 39 and honestly i just love the Duke and the mc just lore is agh even though I'm 1 number hater when she beat the shit out of the ML she love her husband and kid that's one redeeming qaulity
I'm happy Ml isn't head over heels for her from get go but i do understand him not being over her she emotional broke him
BUT what if she beat him and got married to hide the fact that the daughter is the ML's kid? That's my guess atm.
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I HATE THIS SM girly this is all your fault 999 level beauty?? Plus a warning it will change your whole life like babe. babe. You so did this to self your actions have consequences now learn from this I'm gonna quit reading this is if Roger is gonna sexual assault or abuse in any kind of way like the rest
It's not the beauty attribute she raised but the charm one. If it was just beauty, it wouldn't be like this since people would be able to control themselves. Not everyone values beauty, but charm? Charm affects everyone. She basically made her self have that 'something', which is attractive to others and raised it to the max. I can't really blame her though, because she couldn't have predicted she'd get stuck in the game, she just wanted to have fun.
Yeah yeah, that's what i wanted to say but i worded it wrong but still she got a warning that it will heavily affect her game play, also i can't remember outta my head while writing this but I'm pretty sure she died and getting reincarnated into a dating simulator or whatever you'd call it, she can have fun but also think twice about it i mean you just died, but then again I'm not calling her dumb but idk how to put in words but she seems a bit naive.
Blah blah thanks for opinion
No, she didn't die. She simply played a vr game and got stuck in the game's world. When she raised her attributes, she didn't expect to get stuck. It's very understandable she didn't think much about the consequences because it was supposed to just be a game.
Is she naive for other reasons? Yeah
Is she naive for raising her attributes so high? No. No one blames you for being impulsive in a game because it isn't supposed to hurt you. I games you do impulsive stuff to have fun and that's completely normal.
You're right honestly i haven't read this in a while so i forgot a bit of lore
She's just being spontaneous i mean i would too just tiny bit if i was stuck in my fav game though i would be weirded out an wary but that's just her personality