Ok, so I've seen many people tell others that they dont have a right to be upset about the translation since they're under the impression that this is a fan's translation. Unfortunately this NOT a fans translation but is considered an official translation through the webcomics app so this is basically just a reupload. In that case yes someone does have a right to be disappointed with the translating because someone had to actually pay money for this. With that being said WTF is this story even!?!(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
This is honestly giving me major gakuen alice vibes. I mean all the fluffy build up, suppressed powers, a bunch of people she's become close to.
*NOT A SPOILER JUST MY HYPOTHESIS**
Only to have them die later on to accomplish this major plan that is going to change their society or whatever. I haven't finished it yet but I can tell a lot of characters are marked for death during this build up. Honestly gakuen alice is what got me prepared for reads like this haha.
These westernized names are giving me a headache i don't understand why line feels the need to make these names non korean like most of the readers don't know this isn't set in korea or something. Maybe they're trying to get new readers who wouldn't know any better but that's incredibly counter productive in spreading korean media the west!!! ヽ(`Д´)ノ
The raws are on naver webtoon:
https://m.comic.naver.com/webtoon/list.nhn?titleId=738143&page=1&week=wed&sortOrder=DESC