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This story was nice and the drawings are frankly beautiful! But I will say that I think there’s a lot of drama, maybe too much drama for the length of it. Which means that it felt like the story should have spent more time on some aspects - like Carlyle’s twin brother is evoked a bit abruptly and then settled a bit abruptly as well, and it’s just such a sad and horrible thing that it should occupy a bigger part. It’s a bit the same feeling with other aspects of the story. Overall it was still a nice and sweet read, but it’s not my favorite. The drawings do raise its rating a bit.

I really adored this story for many things. It’s very satisfying to be honest. The way Jaina goes through every plan and every time successfully destroys Angela is really really enjoyable to read. You could think it gets boring when it’s this long, but not at all. It’s actually really good. I like this story because Jaina is strong and powerful, she has wits and she manages to make use of her future really well. On the other hand, I also enjoy the way she doesn’t return to her former fiance. He’s very pitiful for sure but I like it. Too many times in those stories the girl go back to her fiancé as if nothing happened, even if he killed her. It’s refreshing to see how she actually kept trauma from it and how it stops her from liking him again, from making everything go back to once it was. I was hoping so badly for Dane and Jaina to end up together and was happy when it happened. The relationship between Jaina and her dad is also very sweet. So this story has a lot of positive aspects really and I will come back to reread it. I didn’t want to finish it truly!

Mmh so I have to say. This story is pretty simple and without any headache or even deep thoughts that need to be put into it. Quite simply, it’s a love story. But it also shows how a story that doesn’t really count any obstacles can get a bit boring. Without any antagonists, you just get the two main characters that love each other, and get together, and then he comes back from war and then they get married… but it’s pretty plan. I honestly liked the drawing, but I think I maybe liked them better with the young version of themselves.
I have to say that I was a bit disappointed with how it unfolded. With 50 chapters I knew the plot wouldn’t be too deep, but the start was fun in some ways. Her friendship with the other girl and then the prince, their bond, it made it interesting and good to read, but the moment where she gets with the ML, things slow down and become less hooking.
Overall, it’s not bad but I probably wouldn’t find myself rereading it.

It was not bad and even quite original. I’d say maybe it was not what I expected? I must admit I wasn’t the most attached to the main couple so it does lessen a bit of the charm of the story but apart from this it was going in an interesting way… even if I feel like there was a bit of an empty moment in the middle (the moment where Lina is gone) and that it accelerated quite suddenly after she came back

This story has a lot of potential. I like the drawings and I feel like the plot isn’t too bad, but the translation isn’t good and confusing. Also I kinda don’t understand why suddenly the prince and the rival fall in love with her. It just seems too convenient to install a love triangle. Overall I guess I’ll give it a 3/5 for the potential but it’s a shame that it’s a bit wasted by other defaults!

Absolutely fantastic story, somehow heartbreaking in all the right ways. I was wondering if the plot would draw me in and the effect was immediate, I read this in two days, l could NOT let go. Must read must read!