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I wasn’t able to overcome the harassment and took my life, but I was reincarnated with the perpetr...

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Okay I’m at chapter 15 and I’m just laughing dying so hard at the non existent survival instinct here like. Okay yes we’re only at chap15 she won’t die but honestly ??
“Mmh that drink is probably poisoned, but it smells normal, let’s DRINK IT !” She couldn’t have idk fake dropped the glass or anything ? No she has to taste it herself and potentially endanger herself ? Like bro cmon you know better than that. I know it’s a strategy from the author so that the ML gets attached to her like oh she drank MY poisoned glass, she’s the love of my life! But this feels so cheap and illogical, especially when SHE IS the one who finds the glass has been tampered with in the first place. It’s so ridiculous, like I enjoy the story so far but I had to talk about that because it’s just too much

At first, Yona gave some major side-eye to the popular game "Concubine Walkthrough" until ...

A bad boy on the surface, a good kid on the inside; A bully on the surface, but a mischievous little...

A bad boy on the surface, a good kid on the inside; A bully on the surface, but a mischievous little...

This was a 5 stars … until the story went fast forward of several years, eight actually. I never like time skip, I really really not like them but eight years ? Well fuck the story is wasted for me already. Why would you do that ? Why would you waste the entire ending when the story was tagging along fine as it was ???? Then he comes back with changed hair, scars etc and im like uhhh who are you sir ? And it feels like they never get any closure in terms of conversation and about yeah why did you leave, some time of forgiveness etc. The extra chapter where he gets turned into a girl honestly has nothing to do here, bring nothing to the story and like YO IF I WANTED TO READ STRAIGHT STUFF I WOULDNT BE READING THIS and yeah it’s shonen ai and yes it was to be expected but the fact there wasn’t even a kiss was just the last straw…

Yeo Eui Joon, who works at a convenience store frequented by gangsters, wants to quit as soon as pos...

Yeo Eui Joon, who works at a convenience store frequented by gangsters, wants to quit as soon as pos...

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That’s my whole opinion on the story summarized there, bear with me if you’re going to read it because it’s quite long but I’ve spilled all of my thoughts.

This story is good but it is disappointing for several reasons, I’ll expand on that. First the story is quite long but it could not have been a bother, but sometimes the plot extends for no reason at all and shows up arcs that do not make much sense or that could have been avoided. The arc with the teacher and his daughter for example, it leads up to plots and the ultimate villain but it honestly could have been avoided cause … who cares. The whole academy plot is sooooooo long and not always interesting. There are parts I was skimming through or skipping cause I thought Urgh that’s boring. Especially why would you introduce a new male interest when you know she won’t pick him? It was just stupid and also okay the main character is pretty that’s part of the plot she looks like a fairy or a reincarnation blah blah blah but that means she couldn’t just develop a simple friendship with the prince it had to be a romance (rolling eyes). I’m really, really glad that the choice was made to switch the love interest to Rei (?) name was changed foo many times, the red dragon, because realistically he is much better than the guardian. And I’m saying that while he didn’t appeal to me at all!! I grew to like him a bit and I was feeling like he was deserving better. This leads to another problem, although the direction was switched, it was only switched in the last chapters, which makes the whole story focused on the romance mainly between the main character and her guardian. It sucks because it then feels her change of heart being very random, she even hurts the red dragon because she’s using him as a bandaid before realizing oh no! I actually had true feeling for him all along and only a crush on my guardian! When the whole plot focuses way more and way too much on the guardian-mc relationship. Too many times, the red dragon becomes a third protagonist that doesn’t interact with the MC, is used as a comic relief or as some fighting in the background while the guardian personally helps the MC. This is very damageable as I find the relationship between the guardian and the MC terrible. It is funny how the plot become very self conscious of itself when the MC and the guardian basically go wait is it her that I love or just the fact she’s a reincarnation ? And too many times, if not always, it’s the fact she’s reincarnated. If she would have ended with him, it would have been insufferable as he never saw her as her true self, compared to the red dragon who always loved her for who she was, didn’t care about the reincarnation stuff, just like her dad. And basically the two most likable characters too, as they don’t go ahead and talk about REINCARNATION ALL THE TIME!! It becomes boring as it’s a very recurring term and it feels like it has eaten away the MC’s personality. It also sucks cause everything revolves around it, like every time you get some plot you’re sure she’s gonna encounter something / someone that has a link with her past self and that will be like : gosh she looks like her. The MC is also way too strong, don’t feel like she encounters much difficulties or it’s always wait a second the allies of my past self are coming to my rescue. This whole story should have focused even more on her continuing her own life and not living in the shadow of her past self, which happens way too often as she always falls on someone that knew her before, finding new allies and friends, and romance, and luckily that point is achieved with the red dragon even if it’s, like I said before, badly brought up and too sudden.
Overall, the plot is a good idea but it’s badly executed. I still spent some good moments in front of it but it was too long for something that became boring from time to time to me. Bonus point for not straight characters appearing into the story, that is very rare and that was a lovely addition.
Bad point of the last chapters : there was no use in bringing back the mother. They had grieved her, it was a part of the story, how it focused on the relationship between the dad and his daughter, and all of a sudden she’s back with basically no explanations. That was way too random and not useful. It just looks like a rushed happy ending

Joara lived and died miserably, but as her life ended she realized that she was reborn as the demon ...

She made the right choice of ml cause my only fear was that she was going to pick the other. I didn’t like any of the ml but tbf but it’s just right.

On a side note, i was checking for fanfics about this webtoon and there are none?? I’m so shocked given the vibes some characters have together, and even due to the fact you have canon not straight characters … I’m half shared between thinking about writing my own and just dying under my load of work

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Since childhood Eiji has always had accidents that would have been fatal, but he always survived uns...

Since childhood Eiji has always had accidents that would have been fatal, but he always survived uns...

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