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I really loved this but I felt somehow disappointed with the end? Like the final fight ? And I feel like there are some stuff that were never explained, like you can say she only “imagined” being in a book but then they shouldn’t have imagined such a “precise story”. Like the girl directly imagined a world that was ours with technology and all that … but actually it’s kinda impossible? Like when you think about the world she’s living in, how can you imagine a world with part time jobs, cars???? and stories updating like webnovels? they shouldn’t have the possibility to even imagine that given what their world looks like? Is it just me that found it weird? Also several other things like when Juvelian ends the fight with Fafnir it’s barely shown and then poof her mother appears and then back to the real world with everyone crying, I found that a tad anticlimactic given the rest of the fight, also how did her dad magically heal from his deadly wound? What was the price to turn back the time? Juvelian was supposed to also have aftermaths of dealing away Fafnir, but she had none because … plot convenience? It’s just quite a lot of things that disturbed me and that made so I couldn’t appreciate the story plenty Id say. If there is more to come I hope some stuff will be talked about. Anyway Legis is so hot, pure daddy vibes, wouldn’t mind having him for my breakfast. Seems like dads stories like that have to have a dad that is way too hot wtf

The plot is interesting and so is the story. The FL is really strong and doesn’t let other people walk on her, you get a good revenge around. I couldn’t really care less about if it’s Chinese, Korean or English, I feel like the drawings and the story are more than nice enough to care about its origin.

I can’t even with that ML. You know sometimes there are characters that are salvageable because they do some harm but their redemption ends up being enough, here I just can’t. I was uneasy with the whole thing. The combination of him being a dick, but also throwing all of her efforts and love to the trash (people can say yeah but she didn’t tell him, and? She didn’t tell him about his love, her devotion was clearly visible) and also the years that pass?? It’s just so bad?? I can’t believe we get a piece of shit like that as the ML? It ruins the whole story for me. He could do whatever he wants, he could save the entire earth or whatever, it still would not be enough to make him likable. It’s too late bro and like it’s too late by several years to try to win that girl’s heart and be jealous and possessive.
I have nothing against bad decisions and meeting again later and misunderstandings being solved and leaving happily ever after, but there is a way to act and often actual feelings, that makes you want to get to that ML point of view. Here it’s so blank he could die and I would be happy about it. On to the next story (and hopefully a way better one) !

Tbh I didn’t dislike this at all. The FL is strong enough, she can actually wield a sword and fend for herself yay! The ML is … a tad possessive and obsessive, like I mean I get you like her but you don’t get to create false rumors and to chase her suitors, she’s not an object she can do whatever you want the fact you like her do not mean it HAS to be reciprocated. The relationship still feels alright and the jump of five years do work as the story prepares for it. The plot could have been worked better I think though. Cause like there is some parts that are still mysterious or hard to understand ? Cause in the first place she says that she reincarnated into Ariel and she lived twice, but are both true ? And if she reincarnated the reason is never explained. I actually did enjoy the fact that it was the ML’s power and that their memories only came back later in the story, that’s a good plot twist kinda. I hated Killian and I was sad cause I thought he could make a good character but he ended up being an ass that could be easily overturned by money and betray the main characters then come back like “I like you, hope we see each other again” how about never b*tch ? Like materialistic reasons are a thing but he said he makes short contract on purpose so that’s just fun to work for enemies, to betray people? And you expect them to be fine with it ? Just no, that just make you a shitty person. When I said about plot that could be better used I also think about that random emperor appearing out of nowhere to tell the ML how to control his powers. How convenient ! There could have been some lore there, some introduction earlier about him but nah why bother, let’s just make a guy with a crown and violet eyes being “have FAITH”.

Like literally, they always think about Arienne first. They just made a comparison of Arienne to their mother (dad and brothers did) and then they barely went : “yeah Arienne and Arjen are sweet like her” like basically they’re all forgetting about Arjen again and about him being independent and having basically a different personality than Arienne, just to include him and make so they think “about him”. Ffs even for his family he’s an extra character this sucks so much.
We’re gonna move on to the brothers story while he didn’t have ANYTHING, I just basically hate this.

Like this story has quite some nice points but I honestly enjoyed Salo more, the demons king was annoying with all his I can’t kill thingy HONESTLY HE WAS SO ANNOYING LIKE BRO IF YOU HAD KILLED SOME BAD GUYS SOONER ITLL BE ALL BETTER!!! And I really like Salo and his story and his devotion. Honestly he never appeared driven by much to the princess’ eyes so … for me he was a good candidate but he was never considered cause yk the story must go to the cliche and she has to accidentally fall on the demon king and to fall in love with him … I’m rolling eyes so hard.

He actually gave it to her as a ring and she took it as a PROPOSAL RING im screaming and dying why was that so predictable and so cringe??
Also : “all my power and life as a guardian comes from you and Arjen” thank you for remembering that you have another guardian like at this rate I’m expecting nothing from this I’m just baffled, why the f did the author think it would be interesting to add that, why are we having a side story with a servant ??? Except if he is to join Arjen’s harem this has no interest like ffs don’t tell me youll get super interested into Arien like all the other lads for no reason… seriously she’s becoming more and more bland, the only reason she’s “interesting” is because the author makes her be, Arjen is like 100% more interesting and we didn’t even get to have real parts about him lol

Okay I’m at chapter 15 and I’m just laughing dying so hard at the non existent survival instinct here like. Okay yes we’re only at chap15 she won’t die but honestly ??
“Mmh that drink is probably poisoned, but it smells normal, let’s DRINK IT !” She couldn’t have idk fake dropped the glass or anything ? No she has to taste it herself and potentially endanger herself ? Like bro cmon you know better than that. I know it’s a strategy from the author so that the ML gets attached to her like oh she drank MY poisoned glass, she’s the love of my life! But this feels so cheap and illogical, especially when SHE IS the one who finds the glass has been tampered with in the first place. It’s so ridiculous, like I enjoy the story so far but I had to talk about that because it’s just too much

This was a 5 stars … until the story went fast forward of several years, eight actually. I never like time skip, I really really not like them but eight years ? Well fuck the story is wasted for me already. Why would you do that ? Why would you waste the entire ending when the story was tagging along fine as it was ???? Then he comes back with changed hair, scars etc and im like uhhh who are you sir ? And it feels like they never get any closure in terms of conversation and about yeah why did you leave, some time of forgiveness etc. The extra chapter where he gets turned into a girl honestly has nothing to do here, bring nothing to the story and like YO IF I WANTED TO READ STRAIGHT STUFF I WOULDNT BE READING THIS and yeah it’s shonen ai and yes it was to be expected but the fact there wasn’t even a kiss was just the last straw…

That’s my whole opinion on the story summarized there, bear with me if you’re going to read it because it’s quite long but I’ve spilled all of my thoughts.

This story is good but it is disappointing for several reasons, I’ll expand on that. First the story is quite long but it could not have been a bother, but sometimes the plot extends for no reason at all and shows up arcs that do not make much sense or that could have been avoided. The arc with the teacher and his daughter for example, it leads up to plots and the ultimate villain but it honestly could have been avoided cause … who cares. The whole academy plot is sooooooo long and not always interesting. There are parts I was skimming through or skipping cause I thought Urgh that’s boring. Especially why would you introduce a new male interest when you know she won’t pick him? It was just stupid and also okay the main character is pretty that’s part of the plot she looks like a fairy or a reincarnation blah blah blah but that means she couldn’t just develop a simple friendship with the prince it had to be a romance (rolling eyes). I’m really, really glad that the choice was made to switch the love interest to Rei (?) name was changed foo many times, the red dragon, because realistically he is much better than the guardian. And I’m saying that while he didn’t appeal to me at all!! I grew to like him a bit and I was feeling like he was deserving better. This leads to another problem, although the direction was switched, it was only switched in the last chapters, which makes the whole story focused on the romance mainly between the main character and her guardian. It sucks because it then feels her change of heart being very random, she even hurts the red dragon because she’s using him as a bandaid before realizing oh no! I actually had true feeling for him all along and only a crush on my guardian! When the whole plot focuses way more and way too much on the guardian-mc relationship. Too many times, the red dragon becomes a third protagonist that doesn’t interact with the MC, is used as a comic relief or as some fighting in the background while the guardian personally helps the MC. This is very damageable as I find the relationship between the guardian and the MC terrible. It is funny how the plot become very self conscious of itself when the MC and the guardian basically go wait is it her that I love or just the fact she’s a reincarnation ? And too many times, if not always, it’s the fact she’s reincarnated. If she would have ended with him, it would have been insufferable as he never saw her as her true self, compared to the red dragon who always loved her for who she was, didn’t care about the reincarnation stuff, just like her dad. And basically the two most likable characters too, as they don’t go ahead and talk about REINCARNATION ALL THE TIME!! It becomes boring as it’s a very recurring term and it feels like it has eaten away the MC’s personality. It also sucks cause everything revolves around it, like every time you get some plot you’re sure she’s gonna encounter something / someone that has a link with her past self and that will be like : gosh she looks like her. The MC is also way too strong, don’t feel like she encounters much difficulties or it’s always wait a second the allies of my past self are coming to my rescue. This whole story should have focused even more on her continuing her own life and not living in the shadow of her past self, which happens way too often as she always falls on someone that knew her before, finding new allies and friends, and romance, and luckily that point is achieved with the red dragon even if it’s, like I said before, badly brought up and too sudden.
Overall, the plot is a good idea but it’s badly executed. I still spent some good moments in front of it but it was too long for something that became boring from time to time to me. Bonus point for not straight characters appearing into the story, that is very rare and that was a lovely addition.
Bad point of the last chapters : there was no use in bringing back the mother. They had grieved her, it was a part of the story, how it focused on the relationship between the dad and his daughter, and all of a sudden she’s back with basically no explanations. That was way too random and not useful. It just looks like a rushed happy ending