Kalinka want to read (All 92)
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This is so well-written. Love the story, love the characters. The smut may be unnecessary, but it didn't distract from the story at all.(and some people love it, I'm sure) I am baffled by the low rating!
Redrawers being way to thirsty. I hope they will see it as honest critic and not simply bashing. The redrawing distracts from the story. In a bl that is not all about smut like in this one, it's better to leave it censored or at least redraw realistically.
To be fair, I personally always prefer a realistic redrawing over ridiculously huge, detailed dicks (while the rest of the artstyle is minimalistic and undetailed) that leak cum in the shape of hearts....