the pacing for both couples at the beginning was pretty rushed because it seems like the author just wanted to get through how they got together all in one chapter for each couple. it feels like I blinked and suddenly they're together.
but the pacing slows down after they're together and the smut is super good. both bouples go through realistic small problems and then its more sex and fluffy moments hehe
I’m actually flabbergasted the writing was so good. They actually have personalities? That’s crazy