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Not only do we not have more comfort scenes at the end, with numerous scenes but the villian's death was so underwhelming that I wished he survived.
Just so the younger of the twins, Hikaru found him later on. We don't need anymore details yanno, just the man being miserable for just a single pannel would be nice. In fact, he should die like how that guy Eunsoo died. Made to go through what our baby went through, all drugged up. He doesn't need to effect our babies lives no more, just some deserved dehumanization. This fic made me so happy and then suddenly, rape, then they were happy and I thought oh its giving ending vibes so I was happy and then rape! Followed by misery and finally raped a final time then the villian fell off a cliff. Huizz