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Bare with me for a moment cus I don’t remember names so ima just describe them by looks and ect. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
First the main couple, yea they’re cute and I liked their story but the Mc was so stubborn and kinda stupid. The ML told the MC not to go near him when he was in his heat bc he didn’t want to hurt him but instead the Mc got mad cus he doesn’t fully understand why they can’t just fuck. Idk I kinda got pissed cus like he didn’t wanna fuck while in his heat and the MC just ignored his feelings abt that. Also was fucked up he kinda played with ML feeling for a bit in the first few chapters. (When the ML got rejected, but then the main character came back to him, asking him to go with his family and then he still got rejected and you know kind of go back-and-forth for a little bit and then the MC says he has a lover when he doesn’t)
Second couple low key dislike the doctor. He played with the brother(black hair) feelings and only when he was abt to lose him did he care. The brother(black hair) is really weak minded bc of his gross older brother. Which makes me thinks that’s the main reason he stayed with the doctor bc he thought in so part of his mind that he overreacted when he overheard the conv with his friends. Which he didn’t if anything he should’ve been more pissed and left him cus wtf. Even if he was just acting all high and mighty in front of his friends he should’ve never said that in the first place abt his lover. Also I dislike how sometimes he kinda just skips over the brother feelings yk(black hair) honestly I believe the black hair deserves better. Though ik some people might say that he did have feelings for the black hair guy but didn’t realize. But you have understand even though he didn’t realize he still hurt his his lover with his actions and his words, which isn’t fair to the black hair guy.
The GROSS brother
He clearly has many things wrong abt him. Not only did he basically bully his brother when they were younger he also tried to rape him and he did sa him. He try’s to make his brother dependent on him so he could never leave him which is really fucked up to be honest. In his sick mind they’re not brothers. He try to break his brother so that he think only he could ever love him for him. Which thankfully never worked. I think he tried to deny the fact he liked his brother so he try to shame him to make him feel as shitty as he does. The brother(black hair) now has to suffer from all that trauma he got from him brother which I hate cus wtf he’s a baby he don’t deserve that no one does. Idk why in the whole family he’s the only that’s fucked up.
(I hope his dick falls off and that he lives in that house always waiting for someone who’s never coming abt cus wtf)
Also I wanted to see how the ML Dad met but oh well