I like, can’t understand what is even happening or the narrative....
The chapters are out of order go by chapters on title page and it makes a little more sense
No I just mean like, the first chapter starts with the conflict, but also very rushingly introduces the rebirth aspect? And then the information in the second chapter is also rushed and confusing. My understanding is that she was an orphan found by the church and found to be very powerful and is now stuck at the church, but this chapter also introduces her friend and focuses really strongly on her backstory without much attention,or to tie to her current situation. Like I didn’t read past chapter 2 but I assume she’s trying to marry the blonde guy so she doesn’t have to stay at the church maybe? I just felt like the narrative’s sudden switch to her backstory after such a strong beginning with the immediate conflict was incredibly jarring....
I felt the same way toward the first three chapters, but if you go on, you'll understand better. It's a very intriguing story, so give it a chance ;) on the first chapters the author did really rush things without a reason
An honestly detestable ML, I hope she gets with Eden! The ML doesn’t need to get what he wants to be redeemed. Also lmao did anyone else think Smurfs when they brought in the blue people?
The narrative was kinda clunky at the beginning but the romance is so fluffy and cute!?
https://forum.novelupdates.com/threads/beatrice.91248/
Someone in this forum was able to read the novel [which is only available in korean] and answered a few people's questions about the future of the story and some such. Even before reading this, I really didn't think the ML was as terrible as everyone else in the comments is seemingly making him out to be? [not saying sob stories fix things 100% but I just didn't think he was that cold to her to start with....]
what's also nice is that the last few pages of comments go into how to spend the 5 dollars to support the author and buy the korean book which can apparently be thrown into a translator 1000 words at a time? Am personally going to see if it works now
When viewed online, you can read the novel in english by using Google Chrome's translate page add on! Please consider supporting the author this way guys!
Thank you
I really liked this story a lot and I hope the guy at least suffers.
I love this premise! Maybe she's a stalker, but she makes him feel human and sometimes your needs and relationship changes idk I hope they get together! It seems like, in the end, she's good for him mentally!
Ugh they just kept teasing it :'C I need more if possible :C
I’m a little sad that a lot of their loveydovey stuff was implicit instead of shown :C I wanted fluff but also more romance? But I wouldn’t trade it for how well executed the story was otherwise, just wanted more!