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they’re so similar to each other i’m gonna pretend they are twins

i don’t think i’ve ever read a webtoon as bad as this one. it’s so stupid and nonsensical it’s actually funny. it’s an equivalent of a wattpad story written by an edgy 14 year old who thought they just had the best idea in the world and no one had ever written anything as good as this. the plot was ass, the characters were ass, the plot twists were ass, the sex scenes were ass, the artstyle was ass. the only way to improve this story is to fucking delete it altogether. complete waste of time. and the pure exposition in the extra chapters felt as if i was reading author’s personal notes about this story, but they didn’t know how to convey this information in any way so they just copy pasted it into the actual webtoon. absolutely phenomenal storytelling, especially the part when the mc tells the reader that even though he lost his memory twice, he still remained gay, and that’s precisely why he got a girlfriend. i refuse to believe anything in story was written seriously.

also, with the amount of direct explanations we’re given at the end, no one mentions who the fuck that blond chick actually is. it’s kind of implied by the psycho guy that she’s that blonde guy from the mc’s high school years, but at the same time everyone says he died and neither the characters nor the story itself ever denies it. so who the fuck was she? no one knows, probably not even the author themself. the psycho guy told the mc that he decided to kidnap only the people who made the mc’s life a “living hell”, and then there’s this random ass girl whom he keeps in one of his rooms and it’s never even explained.

anyway, i think that the fact that this story went through all those editors at l*zh*n, got accepted and then fucking published on a website where you have to pay real, hard earned money for each chapter, serves as a good reminder that no matter how stupid you think your idea is, it’s still probably better than this one. so go for it, write that silly little story of yours and make your dreams come true. if this garbage right here got published, then literally anything can.

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people bitching about every bl having rape and sa clearly forgot they have the choice to just not read such things. there are tons of bls that don’t have any rape or sa, and are wholesome, or can be even on a darker side yet still have consensual and respectful relationship between the main couple, so when there’s a story that starts with rape and is clearly about sexual abuse, why bother and read it if it’s not your cup of tea? even the cover was such a huge indicator of what the story was going to be about. at this point y’all are doing it to yourself on purpose. if you really want to waste your energy on saying how there’s rape everywhere, you should at least go for some webtoons that have sa but never address it and brush it off because the main couple need to end up together with their happily ever after, and addressing the noncon by the author would ruin all of that. at least this story doesn’t promise their relationship is going to pretend to be healthy and happy, when the mc is clearly not in his right mind by the end of it. i understand discussing the plot in general or whether the ending was good or not, but saying the story is trash just because it has rape in it? just hit the back button in your browser or close the tab and get out if it’s not something you fw.

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ohhhh prisoner and prison guard? this looks yummy. i really hope they won’t turn wholesome like in the author’s previous work.

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i’m more than 20 chapters in and this story is just boring. there are some things going on, there is some development between the mc and ml, but god it feels so dragged out and filled with scenes that are just unnecessary and don’t make the plot progress in any significant way. not to mention these “comedy” moments that are just stupid and unfunny, and take away from the tension that has somehow managed to built up. and the mc seems kinda dense. the only interesting aspect of this story is ilay but idk if i should bother with reading the rest of it just to see more of him.

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