beta
i’m more than 20 chapters in and this story is just boring. there are some things going on, there is some development between the mc and ml, but god it feels so dragged out and filled with scenes that are just unnecessary and don’t make the plot progress in any significant way. not to mention these “comedy” moments that are just stupid and unfunny, and take away from the tension that has somehow managed to built up. and the mc seems kinda dense. the only interesting aspect of this story is ilay but idk if i should bother with reading the rest of it just to see more of him.