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It should have ended when she finally took revenge. I could have happily go to sleep too! But NO! It went on with 20 more chapters of confusion, misunderstandings and pain for everyone involved, mixing in 2 kids(!!) AND time skips(!!), just for her to realise he still loves him and doesn't want him to die... ma'am, this could have been an email. Like, now I end up going to sleep after crying my eyes out in FRUSTRATION. I am not rating this story, deserver 5* for first half and the fact it incited so much emotion from me, but for the later half I'd give it 2-3* for how frustrating it was.
The way I am NOT usually into whiny/crybaby tops and I find this one SO endearing !!! Frey is written so well!!!
Frey is just expressive , gotta love thatttt