beta
I don't know if it's the translation or the writing itself but it's bad. They're going on about the same thing "is this love" "this is love" "this love is impure" "this love is not meant to be" this and that.
Plot wise the story is good. Its toxic but the theme is pretty mature.
The pacing is horrible. They could've enhanced the writing itself by throwing some typically hard sentences to make it more suitable to the time they're in.
I hope the official translation this might get can improve their speech.