Yuki Moon November 12, 2024 7:07 am

I almost fell asleep reading the second chapter. I know that I didn't get far into it at all, but this is so terribly boring. The main problem is that there's no conflict. She transmigrates into a novel she read, the body that she took over has zero negative effects on both the children and their brother, the brother doesn't seem to be a harda** or and a**hole, and etc. There's zero conflict to buffer out

    fairykhai November 19, 2024 9:48 pm

    then dont read it. its very clearly a slice of life not much action (at least not currently)
    slice of life isnt going to be for everyone

    Yuki Moon November 20, 2024 5:26 am
    then dont read it. its very clearly a slice of life not much action (at least not currently) slice of life isnt going to be for everyone fairykhai

    I already stopped a long while ago ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭.

    Also, it's not because it's a slice of life that I found it boring. It's because it started out with a bit of suspense with her saying what character she transmigrated into and the possible problems that would bring, and then basically throwing that away. Not only that, but the beginning didn't really have a beginning. It was just rushed information, some throw aways, and BAM! Slice of Life!!

    The names are also so unoriginal. I normally don't care about that aspect in any sort of entertainment, but it really got me to not really care what happened to each of the kids.

    Also, even in a slice of life, there are conflicts. Probably not as big as most action stories, but small enough to make the story have some kind of ups and downs...if that makes sense. Like trying to get to know the kids, but the kids are wary of her, so she tries her best to win them over that day and succeeds.

    This would make the story flow much better with some kind of beginning like that, because it'll make us care more about the characters and the story in the long run. Basically, I would've continued to read it because it shows a more natural flow to her and the kids' relationship.

    Whatever, though. That's just me. Thanks for reading and have a lovely day!

Yuki Moon October 15, 2024 3:14 am

First, my dude, Desmond!! Do you have enough space in your head, or do you need more?! I'm asking because you were somewhere off in Lala Land that whole freaking dinner!!

Second, Father-Blinkless, blink, my dude, BLINK!!! Like seriously!! Are you trying to assess them or win a staring contest with their soul?! I wanted to scream "Personal space!!", despite you being a very good distance away from your wife!! How much money do you spend on eye drops, better yet, what kind of brand do you use?! I'm asking for Aizawa, dude could use whatever the heck is keeping your eyes moist enough to stare into the deep dark abyss of our very beings!!!

Thirdly, GIRL!!!! HOW THE ACTUAL FUDGING HECKING HECK DID YOU MAKE TWO KIDS WITH THIS GUY??????!!!!! Like, was he different and then he changed after having Damian???? Like, what the fricken hecking becking heck?!

Fourthly, Damian...despite me being very concerned about your well-being while you're around your family...I'm happy that you got the praise that you wanted...just please be careful and don't get too traumatized!

Fifthly, yeah. I'm pretty darn sure that Sir Blinkless ain't entirely human. I wouldn't be surprised if he was some kind of robot or zombie being controlled by the government or something.

    MagicalReader October 17, 2024 4:37 pm

    I'm dying. I was screaming blink especially when I went back and saw his pupils moving slightly watching his wife and kids. Like how they reproduce l feel for the oldest. ┗( T﹏T )┛

Yuki Moon September 8, 2024 2:42 pm

Lol, a sudden flashback of my three paged essay being deleted after a blackout ran through my mind...

Yuki Moon July 21, 2024 9:53 pm

War is so pointless...fighting over stuff that can be resolved over simple logical and rational discussions, and sacrificing people as if they were pawns on a board. Unnecessary killing, so much death, sadness, and loss. It's so annoying. How on earth can soldiers fight for a cause that won't matter in the end? How can they fight as chess peices for those who should be fighting their own battles? How are people so irrational that they believe that killing each other over an insignificant argument between two or more incompetent people is the correct thing to do? We're all born in this world, we all live here, and we will all die here. What point is there to go to war when everything that is fought for won't matter in the end? When it will just dissappear with time, and no one will ever acknowledge or even remember it. Why repeat the same mistakes over and over again? It's so pointless and a freaking waste of everything!

Yuki Moon June 21, 2024 5:58 pm

Always knew that there was something controlling Hugo.

When Hugo was first presented in the past, he seemed like a straight up cruel as heck dude. But when he was officially introduced in the reincarnation, he seemed more like a cruel dude that holds his own morals and can still feel love and worry towards another family member. He instantly became my favorite character because of the fact that he had more to him. It was so weird how he was supposed to be the villain, but he just seemed like a hurt individual who was slowly getting attached to his brilliant son while exuding denial. At least in my eyes! I kept thinking that past Hugo must've been controlled and/or deceived, because there was no way that he can change so drastically without outside influence. When Pom came into play, I knew for absolute sure that Hugo was being manipulated.

I'm absolutely glad that the truth came out before Hugo died! I'm glad that he'll have a happier future now, and I hope that he gets to meet the Tribe Leader Lady!!

Not so they can fall in love and all that jazz, but so that they can be partners-in-crime! It truly feels like if they both had a moment and time to be around eachother without being too hostile, they'll be great friends who gives eachother crap while also being menaces to society! I'm serious!! I can literally see them getting along!!

Yuki Moon June 16, 2024 5:42 am

I can't wait to read more of this!!! This is so new and interestingly weird, lmao!!!!

Yuki Moon June 16, 2024 5:42 am

LMFAO!!!! WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK?!

Yuki Moon May 22, 2024 1:41 am

Looks like I gotta dig out the kidnap bag again...

    Lazy_Potato May 22, 2024 3:33 am

    I'll be your accomplice, bring him to my basement, I have a lot of torture tools there

    Yuki Moon May 23, 2024 12:42 am
    I'll be your accomplice, bring him to my basement, I have a lot of torture tools there Lazy_Potato

    Kinda concerned about your basement, but at the same time, I love the convenience!

Yuki Moon May 20, 2024 9:42 pm

This is just your typical, "I have lived multiple lives and go reincarnated in a world that I know the future of and I'm a kid, so I'm going to act immature and dumb so that I can create drama for no reason!"

She has lived 99 lives for goodness sakes!! She may have lived only up to the age 19 or below in all of those lives, but she should have also learned and experienced many things!! She was always a villain's daughter, and by the looks of it, it was to mostly noble families! You would think that she was properly taught about etiquette, politics, and other BASIC educational things that MOST noble children would learn!! Yes, she presumably looses her memories the moment she goes into the next life, but seeing how she seems to remember the spiritual world and the future, we can assume that she also remembers her past lives!! SO WHY IS SHE ACTING LIKE AN IDIOT WHO KNOWS NOTHING ABOUT THE DAMN WORLD!!!!????? She should be the BEST equipped reincarnator in the history of reincarnators!!!

So stupid and disappointing...

    Sir]12344 May 21, 2024 12:34 am

    Honestly I feel the same. Like the premise is actually interesting but the execution of it is disappointing.

    Peach May 26, 2024 10:49 pm

    Honestly. It’s just getting repetitive and boring.

Yuki Moon April 29, 2024 6:03 am

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!
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