DISSSAAAPPPOOOIINNNNTTTMMMMEEEEEEEENNNNNTTT!!!!!! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Despite me feeling bad about him dying, I'm kinda disappointed that he didn't die...
Is this any good? No sudden harems? No idiotic perversions that gets the MC in trouble for no reason? No stupid FL doing stupid crap and annoying the readers? No cliché MC mistakes that could've been easily avoidable? Is this worth the read at all?
Yessir it's hella good
I honestly don't even think there's romance in this story (?) for the mc
Kk, I'll take your word on this!
Lmk how it turns out for you, I personally really like It since it's unique
It’s honestly amazing
See? Told ya so
Poor dude's dying from Tetanus
Love how nonchalant the other guys are. One of them said as he convulsed uncontrollably on the ground “hey what are you doing?”
Lol! If I was in that situation, I would've used all of my strength to reply with a sarcastic remark, and then straight up die!
Her claims may not be too far from the truth...
What if her actual husband is actually dead and he was replaced by cyborg or robot? We seen from the movie (Code White) that humans with technical augmentations is quite possible, so this little theory wouldn't be so far-fetched. What if they somehow preserved his body after death and has been controlling him with a chip like a puppet to a puppeteer? Or, one of my favorite theories, he's being puppeteered by one of the successful experiments that Anya was part of?
Not the exact one of course! That wouldn't make sense to the time-line. We know that Anya and her group wasn't the only experiments that were going on. We know that Bond's animal experiment group was a thing, and thus, it's not hard to believe that there were more experiments going on years before them. There could be a possibility that they accidentally created someone with strong mental powers who they now use to control the husband creep, and they've been trying to replicate it, but kept failing. It's super-duper far-fetched and the biggest stretch that I have ever thought of, but maybe?
I almost fell asleep reading the second chapter. I know that I didn't get far into it at all, but this is so terribly boring. The main problem is that there's no conflict. She transmigrates into a novel she read, the body that she took over has zero negative effects on both the children and their brother, the brother doesn't seem to be a harda** or and a**hole, and etc. There's zero conflict to buffer out
then dont read it. its very clearly a slice of life not much action (at least not currently)
slice of life isnt going to be for everyone
I already stopped a long while ago ╮(￣▽￣)╭.
Also, it's not because it's a slice of life that I found it boring. It's because it started out with a bit of suspense with her saying what character she transmigrated into and the possible problems that would bring, and then basically throwing that away. Not only that, but the beginning didn't really have a beginning. It was just rushed information, some throw aways, and BAM! Slice of Life!!
The names are also so unoriginal. I normally don't care about that aspect in any sort of entertainment, but it really got me to not really care what happened to each of the kids.
Also, even in a slice of life, there are conflicts. Probably not as big as most action stories, but small enough to make the story have some kind of ups and downs...if that makes sense. Like trying to get to know the kids, but the kids are wary of her, so she tries her best to win them over that day and succeeds.
This would make the story flow much better with some kind of beginning like that, because it'll make us care more about the characters and the story in the long run. Basically, I would've continued to read it because it shows a more natural flow to her and the kids' relationship.
Whatever, though. That's just me. Thanks for reading and have a lovely day!
First, my dude, Desmond!! Do you have enough space in your head, or do you need more?! I'm asking because you were somewhere off in Lala Land that whole freaking dinner!!
Second, Father-Blinkless, blink, my dude, BLINK!!! Like seriously!! Are you trying to assess them or win a staring contest with their soul?! I wanted to scream "Personal space!!", despite you being a very good distance away from your wife!! How much money do you spend on eye drops, better yet, what kind of brand do you use?! I'm asking for Aizawa, dude could use whatever the heck is keeping your eyes moist enough to stare into the deep dark abyss of our very beings!!!
Thirdly, GIRL!!!! HOW THE ACTUAL FUDGING HECKING HECK DID YOU MAKE TWO KIDS WITH THIS GUY??????!!!!! Like, was he different and then he changed after having Damian???? Like, what the fricken hecking becking heck?!
Fourthly, Damian...despite me being very concerned about your well-being while you're around your family...I'm happy that you got the praise that you wanted...just please be careful and don't get too traumatized!
Fifthly, yeah. I'm pretty darn sure that Sir Blinkless ain't entirely human. I wouldn't be surprised if he was some kind of robot or zombie being controlled by the government or something.
I'm dying. I was screaming blink especially when I went back and saw his pupils moving slightly watching his wife and kids. Like how they reproduce l feel for the oldest. ┗( T﹏T )┛
Lol, a sudden flashback of my three paged essay being deleted after a blackout ran through my mind...
I honestly don't want the brother to die. I really want both the brother and MC to get along like actual brothers or at least very close friends. I really want the MC to be all like; "You're the one person who I will refrain from killing because you're more than just an asset to me."
Like, just that one person who he can actually share a bond with that's close but also not romantic
Are you even reading this? MC doesn’t consider anybody a brother. In fact, he would need to meet somebody stronger than him and as twisted to get along.
Bro...are we reading the same manhwa??
?...um, yeah...I know? I was saying that I wished that they got along like actual brothers, not that they were? I really don't understand why you and the other person are upset. I mean, I love how the MC is, but I just wished that the MC had other bonds.
Also, the stronger part isn't entirely true. He seemed to have forged a sweet kind of bond with Body Gaurd guy. Enough of a bond to try his hardest to make sure that he "survives". Sure, it was mostly because he saves MC, but it was kinda sweet that MC wanted to a save him
And I said that he doesn’t consider anybody a brother, and he likely won’t. Their personalities are opposites. His brother literally wants to murder him because he doesn’t like that MC is evil.
That’s what I thought, the brother is literally set up as his enemy and the opposite and this reader wants them to be sweet together. This is so absurd I don’t even know how to start explaining why.
???????? I wasn’t saying that wasn't the case???? I know what's happening and what's being set up, I was just speaking out a notgoingtohappen wish? It's not like I'm saying "They're going to become brothers and besties for life in the future!" I'm saying "Man, I would've loved if these guys actually somehow became actual brothers or something. That would've been interesting to see!"
Sooooo, what on earth is the problem??? Why is me putting out a withered wish such a problem??? Are you guys perhaps not comprehending me? It obviously seems to be some sort of misunderstanding. Even though I never said I didn't understand the plot line?? I just thought that it would've been interesting to see him have a living relationship with someone who he isn't going to kill sooner rather than later. I mean, They're already setting up the female lead and everything...soooo...why is this so bad for you guys?????
Lol, I wasn't upset, I was just genuinely confused as to how that wish even came about.
The MC hardly likes anyone so I can't even imagine a scenario where the brother, of all people, would get along with him. I get it tho, it would have been an interesting dynamic but considering the manhwa, I don't think it has really crossed anyone's mind for such a thing to happen. His relationship with the spirits (including the bodyguard) is the closest we would probably get to him caring about anybody.
Yeah, I also understand that the manhwa is setting up for a "female lead" (honestly, I doubt it but that seems to be the case atm) and that might bring a change in his behavior.
Thanks for your explanation! I kinda get it now!
I honestly don't want a female lead or romance to happen with him. I feel like it'll become a bit too cliché...