
I almost fell asleep reading the second chapter. I know that I didn't get far into it at all, but this is so terribly boring. The main problem is that there's no conflict. She transmigrates into a novel she read, the body that she took over has zero negative effects on both the children and their brother, the brother doesn't seem to be a harda** or and a**hole, and etc. There's zero conflict to buffer out
I already stopped a long while ago ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭.
Also, it's not because it's a slice of life that I found it boring. It's because it started out with a bit of suspense with her saying what character she transmigrated into and the possible problems that would bring, and then basically throwing that away. Not only that, but the beginning didn't really have a beginning. It was just rushed information, some throw aways, and BAM! Slice of Life!!
The names are also so unoriginal. I normally don't care about that aspect in any sort of entertainment, but it really got me to not really care what happened to each of the kids.
Also, even in a slice of life, there are conflicts. Probably not as big as most action stories, but small enough to make the story have some kind of ups and downs...if that makes sense. Like trying to get to know the kids, but the kids are wary of her, so she tries her best to win them over that day and succeeds.
This would make the story flow much better with some kind of beginning like that, because it'll make us care more about the characters and the story in the long run. Basically, I would've continued to read it because it shows a more natural flow to her and the kids' relationship.
Whatever, though. That's just me. Thanks for reading and have a lovely day!
A manga with at least a decent amount of chapters (I don't mind longer, but no oneshots) and the uke is most preferably straight (but is also kinda seme-like and/or isn't cute/girly). Also a seme who is indeed gay or falls for uke even though he's straight and pursues him. Also some good relationship development and a bit of comedy please!!! With a plot where you say 'WOW' with all your heart!!!
idk if it'll make you say wow but this comes to mind http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/boku_no_omawarisan/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/bl_motel/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/totally_captivated/
i searched long & hard for these lol, lmk what you think =)
Her claims may not be too far from the truth...
What if her actual husband is actually dead and he was replaced by cyborg or robot? We seen from the movie (Code White) that humans with technical augmentations is quite possible, so this little theory wouldn't be so far-fetched. What if they somehow preserved his body after death and has been controlling him with a chip like a puppet to a puppeteer? Or, one of my favorite theories, he's being puppeteered by one of the successful experiments that Anya was part of?
Not the exact one of course! That wouldn't make sense to the time-line. We know that Anya and her group wasn't the only experiments that were going on. We know that Bond's animal experiment group was a thing, and thus, it's not hard to believe that there were more experiments going on years before them. There could be a possibility that they accidentally created someone with strong mental powers who they now use to control the husband creep, and they've been trying to replicate it, but kept failing. It's super-duper far-fetched and the biggest stretch that I have ever thought of, but maybe?