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Yuki Moon November 12, 2024 7:07 am

I almost fell asleep reading the second chapter. I know that I didn't get far into it at all, but this is so terribly boring. The main problem is that there's no conflict. She transmigrates into a novel she read, the body that she took over has zero negative effects on both the children and their brother, the brother doesn't seem to be a harda** or and a**hole, and etc. There's zero conflict to buffer out

    fairykhai November 19, 2024 9:48 pm

    then dont read it. its very clearly a slice of life not much action (at least not currently)
    slice of life isnt going to be for everyone

    Yuki Moon November 20, 2024 5:26 am
    then dont read it. its very clearly a slice of life not much action (at least not currently) slice of life isnt going to be for everyone fairykhai

    I already stopped a long while ago ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭.

    Also, it's not because it's a slice of life that I found it boring. It's because it started out with a bit of suspense with her saying what character she transmigrated into and the possible problems that would bring, and then basically throwing that away. Not only that, but the beginning didn't really have a beginning. It was just rushed information, some throw aways, and BAM! Slice of Life!!

    The names are also so unoriginal. I normally don't care about that aspect in any sort of entertainment, but it really got me to not really care what happened to each of the kids.

    Also, even in a slice of life, there are conflicts. Probably not as big as most action stories, but small enough to make the story have some kind of ups and downs...if that makes sense. Like trying to get to know the kids, but the kids are wary of her, so she tries her best to win them over that day and succeeds.

    This would make the story flow much better with some kind of beginning like that, because it'll make us care more about the characters and the story in the long run. Basically, I would've continued to read it because it shows a more natural flow to her and the kids' relationship.

    Whatever, though. That's just me. Thanks for reading and have a lovely day!

Yuki Moon October 15, 2024 3:14 am

First, my dude, Desmond!! Do you have enough space in your head, or do you need more?! I'm asking because you were somewhere off in Lala Land that whole freaking dinner!!

Second, Father-Blinkless, blink, my dude, BLINK!!! Like seriously!! Are you trying to assess them or win a staring contest with their soul?! I wanted to scream "Personal space!!", despite you being a very good distance away from your wife!! How much money do you spend on eye drops, better yet, what kind of brand do you use?! I'm asking for Aizawa, dude could use whatever the heck is keeping your eyes moist enough to stare into the deep dark abyss of our very beings!!!

Thirdly, GIRL!!!! HOW THE ACTUAL FUDGING HECKING HECK DID YOU MAKE TWO KIDS WITH THIS GUY??????!!!!! Like, was he different and then he changed after having Damian???? Like, what the fricken hecking becking heck?!

Fourthly, Damian...despite me being very concerned about your well-being while you're around your family...I'm happy that you got the praise that you wanted...just please be careful and don't get too traumatized!

Fifthly, yeah. I'm pretty darn sure that Sir Blinkless ain't entirely human. I wouldn't be surprised if he was some kind of robot or zombie being controlled by the government or something.

    MagicalReader October 17, 2024 4:37 pm

    I'm dying. I was screaming blink especially when I went back and saw his pupils moving slightly watching his wife and kids. Like how they reproduce l feel for the oldest. ┗( T﹏T )┛

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Yuki Moon October 26, 2020 2:55 am

Anyone have any yaoi manga where there's a seme-like uke and/or vice versa?

Yuki Moon April 4, 2020 2:49 am

A manga with at least a decent amount of chapters (I don't mind longer, but no oneshots) and the uke is most preferably straight (but is also kinda seme-like and/or isn't cute/girly). Also a seme who is indeed gay or falls for uke even though he's straight and pursues him. Also some good relationship development and a bit of comedy please!!! With a plot where you say 'WOW' with all your heart!!!

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