VBurton want to read (All 149)
beta
Does anyone else feel like the story got worse after Ashtarte grew up? It started off really good but after the time skip it felt so rushed and then it abruptly ended…not to mention the ending just sucked. Now we’re getting extras it would have been better if instead the story could have just been extended and more fleshed out properly.
Tbh the only thing I didn’t like about the ending was that weak ass kiss. After so many chapters, they could’ve given us something more proper
The issue I have with this story is that it has this horror/sci-fi element that is incredibly interesting but has a habit of focusing more on the two brothers banging than anything else…it could take a few pointers from Dreadful Night that balances the horror and romance really well!