
The writing and scripting is pretty childish. If you want to shoot for older audiences, it has to be more realistic than this. Like, every single think he does is narrated and a good story doesnât need to be narrated âI said no to him but I felt badâ, I can tell and you said it 3 times already. Writing is not sophisticated like it should be for older audiences.

Dear @meruemshu ,
So sorry about my rude comment, although I donât necessarily know what was rude about it. Would you please enlighten me? I also want to let you know that I had no foul intentions when replying to you. I am also a real person behind the screen and when you talk like that, it ruins someoneâs day. Please donât be the reason to make someone feel bad. You probably donât care, but just a thought to consider.
Why am I writing all this you may say, well, I feel very horrible that I might have made you upset. I hope you see this. Itâll make me a little at ease.
Thank you.

Although I like the plot, I like the cuteness but that good plot and cuteness gets tampered when you know the couple met when one of them was under 10 and the other was an high schooler. Itâs weird even tho he didnât have any bad intentions, especially when he keeps bringing the kid up. He still does not have any feelings for that 30? 20? Something year old kid (the kid does tho). I feel like the author has a weird fetish because even the side couple has a huge age gap. Isnât it weird when the couple look into their childhood photos and saying âI was in high school when you were just 8â. Thatâs so fucking disgusting. But why does the plot have to be good and interesting??? I wouldâve dropped this if not for the good plot.

This bearded dude it so creepy. I donât even wanna see him. The uncomfortableness I feel knowing he exists is unfathomable. And Horus, please pay for your sins.

Oh shoot I completely forgot about the other time when the sun god bewitched him. That was so uncomfortable. Itâs been like 2 years? Or 1 year since I read that? Even if he may not have done that willingly, I hope he still tries to amend because it was still traumatizing for Seth. And the sun god is so mysterious I donât even know. I feel they started all this.

Set hasnât apologized to Horus for attempting to rape him, and what earlier chapters are you talking about? The S2? Or S1 around ch 34-35?
Cause the S1 is not him who raped set, Horus is also a victim in that case, it was physically Horusâs body but his mind was controlled by Sekhmet to rape Set.
If youâre talking about the chapters where Set kissed Horus and Horus was overjoyed and assaulted Set, then yes, but I wouldnât think Set cared as much since he wasnât focusing on the assault itself but more on like âwoah Horusâs expression is so differentâ.
The author doesnât have a good writing tbh when it comes to matching expressions/body language with thoughts.

True. I did meant when he assaulted Seth. Seth told him to stop and says no but it just makes me sad that no one listens to him. That Horus was a victim too and that is why I said Sekhmet is disgusting and we need justice. But even if Horus wasnât the one inflicting the trauma, I think a normal conscious being would think to say sorry or feel guilty atleast somewhat.

The author most likely fetishizes rape and little to no apology. The author also made Set think more about Horusâs expression looking different than the actual assault happening to him, he did say stop but then focused on Horusâs expression instead of the normal trauma reaction. But I guess it could also be because theyâre not mortals, just a thought.
When can I see Jay again