The Tyrant's Only Perfumer
I Became the Daughter-In-Law of the Villain Because I'm Terminally Ill!
I am a child of this house
The only likeable characters are the father
The brother is very flat as a character, his entire personality is “I like everyone that is family and hate everyone else”
The other characters are too insignificant like iris or the queen, why mention it if they pose no real presence in the story.
It feels like there’s also no point in the mc being reincarnated when she retained no memories of her past or it didn’t lead to anything.
Plus the age gap
In the story with Emels sibling being introduced, he was assumed to be in his late 20’s while the Mc was in her teens
Emel has been an adult since she was 12 meaning the age gap is similar to his brother and her.
So why did the author make it weird with his brother, but with Emel it’s all sunshine and fine.
There really is no villain, the wizards seem to be a massive threat in the beginning but after one incident they never appear again or even mentioned.
I think the kidnapping scene was done beautifully with all the suspense and torture for several chapters to make the reader truly feel how helpless the mc felt, but that’s it.
All other big scenes were in ruins and really insignificant.
Also Emel is too possessive and frankly acts disgusting, he often gaslights the mc and makes it so she is isolated from others as much as he can so he is the only one by her side.
Plus she is a minor, and it’s hinted he’s had feelings since she was 14 which is pretty weird.
I Became the Tyrant's Secretary