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First of all, here's a bit of a spoiler. She's supposedly the daughter of a woman accused of having had an affair with a demon. It's unclear why they tarnished her mother's reputation, as there's no background story about it. It all happened too quickly. Her master's actions are somewhat suspicious. Why did he want to break the blood pact? The story itself has potential, but it feels rushed. There's no information about her father or mother. How did her father end up with two dozen wives? It seems like he's not just creating a large family, but a massive one.
Now, another spoiler. The last part of the story is quite shocking and somewhat cruel. Her master arrived late, leaving her traumatized in that situation. Instead of offering support, he tells her, 'I'm your master, he's just controlling you... something.' She was clearly shocked and traumatized. She's still weak, even though she shares your blood. He could have reassured her with something like, 'It's going to be okay.' She needs more love and support. She's been through so much. The female main character really needs someone to comfort her and help her express her anger and sadness.
Furthermore, even though her father is handsome, his interest in her seems solely based on her survival. They all appear to be flawed characters. The only thing I truly appreciate in this story so far is her servant.