I can’t decide if I hate the art or I really hate the art. It’s weirdly generic??? It may be considered good if all the characters were modeled after a Ken doll….
I will give it a few more chapters.
Art was a bit off for me as well in these first chapters l, but at least for my taste it became way better in later chapters. Most recent ones remind me of the art style from Pearl boy and some other manhwa (I'm not saying it in negative way, some stories just have similar vibe when it comes to art and design)
Thanks for the update! Do you happen to know where I can read the raws? The story is intriguing and my curiosity is piqued. I am so relieved the art gets better. I loved the art style of Pearl Boy. :)
Thank you for uploading this. I cannot find the raws anywhere anymore and this is the only place to read it. If anyone can tell me where I can get the raws, that would be greatly appreciated. It is no longer on Mr.blue.
This is a very unique art style. It is beautiful, but also not beautiful….hard to explain. I love the story and premise. It’s definitely not a light read, for sure. It is a lot to chew on. I like it.
…but it should have been longer! Such a cute story and great build up of characters. Good drawing too, albeit a bit awkward? Beautiful.
…he calls him dad. It’s likely because he doesn’t know what it’s like to have a dad, and he is the only male who provided any kind of nurturing and love. It’s an all encompassing love~like father, brother, lover, friend. I don’t think it’s right, but it’s kind of sad and beautiful at the same time.
This is a great story and novel premise. It reminds me a little of Enders Game with the Formica ant thing. I like the art too, and I think it’s hilarious about how Van is such a freak. I hope he truly comes out with some redeeming quality, since that poor skinny dude has suffered enough. I can’t wait to read more of this!
First, the art is good, but the pointy chins and the weird glasses are getting me. And a lot of the characters look alike so I get confused sometimes. I liked where this started at first, but the plot is getting confusing and somewhat repetitive. I don’t understand how they broke up but are not broken up? I am not sure where this is going to lead to. The beat downs are crazy extreme though. I like how beautiful the mom is and how she still struggles to try to get some freedom for her son. It’s okay so far, but after a few more chapters, if there is no significant progress, I can’t take the ML apathy.
The world and the characters are absolutely amazing. The main characters are really beautiful beings. The idea of the avian and serpent races i so vivid and imaginative. This needs a bit better smut scenes, but other than that, it is amazing. That is a piddly little critique, but it’s the only one I have. Absolutely amazing story!
If you like this, there’s a book called Hawksong that I think this story is at least lightly if not directly inspired by/based on, it’s a straight version and the characters are definitely more flawed. The avians are the emotionless ones, it’s an interesting dynamic and story tbh
Thanks for the tip! I will definitely check it out! :)
This has the makings of a great historical BL comedy! Why yes, that IS my stuff! lol
I love the art style! What a gorgeous setting for a beautiful story! Thank you so much for translating!