I swear it’s like someone else wrote this story! Like, BJ Alex was no masterpiece but come on! It had direction and solid parts!!! We loved and hated Alex in addictive chaps, but this story has lead up to so many dull climax’s that constantly change direction to dead end boring writing. Dan was a repetitive sex slave and now he’s like a retarded bland little brother a roommate. Ugh, I’m so bored but i feel like I’ve used up so much time and brain cells that I have to keep waiting for an actual intriguing part to arise. I’m so tiiiiired ( ̄へ ̄)This new fighter better be an actual stick-around character that spices up something and Granny better go die already because I’m so tired of looking at her leathery skin and hanging open mouth.
Can someone rec something like this, but it be actually GOOD? I like toxic stories but I need intriguing writing too.
the writing isn’t peak, but these stories are entertaining and flow well. if you’re looking for toxic romances with power imbalances:
- the bottom is rich, top is in debt
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/boss_bitch_baby/
- bottom is a drug dealer, navigating life in old kowloon
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/darkness_before_the_dawn/
- bottom is indebted to top
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/limited_run/
- love interests need each other, rough start
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/night_song_mgs/
I really like that this was not “instant gay”. This was paced well, funny, corny, sexy and really ridiculous. The Boss didn’t fall instantly for him or become gay by ch 2—It was somehow believable how this has played out between these two. I also like that this isn’t too layered; it’s pretty simple even with the slight supernatural aspect that’s not too saturated in it. It’s definitely no Dangerous Convenience Store, or Finder, caliber of Yakuza story, but basically im digging it. (▰˘◡˘▰)
I kinda… liked it. I guess it’s because I’ve been starving for 43 chapters and it was a little bit—real? Like, everything has been so wacked out and unrealistically unhinged that this one felt like an actual experience, like when I was a teen and really liked someone who finally noticed me. It wasn’t bad, but it was finally something different. Bare minimum good.
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Hi, readers. What is the site that ppl are reading this earlier on? I can’t find it anymore. It’s lost in my history.
There are a few but here is one.
https://yaoimangaonline.com/jinx-by-mingwa-eng/
Yea, they are on the nose with POTN with this first erotic encounter like NK’s being all delusional too and thinking it’s his teacher. I’m hoping this story doesn’t perfectly copy like this as it goes on because nothing will be exciting if we know it’s coming. I do like that it’s def inspired by it dang this is totally the same so far. Guys, I like toxic, I like tragic romance and painful scenes with great redemption—I don’t mind what others couldn’t handle with POTN, but I don’t like predictable chapters. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧ I am VERY happy that we get a st8 historical story like this where there is finally no European evil duke blah blah, and I love the art—I swear I’m not downing it. I truly feel lucky to get to read this. I just want it to be its own special thing with similar vibes to POTN, not just a st8 re-telling
whats POTNs full title?
painter of the night its yaoi
ohh ty i can also see some similarities