
This was really nice art and interesting story however...
The personality of the uke pisses me off and the choices he made throughout the story irritated me as well.
The words he said to the seme often are harsh and uncalled for. When its someone you love.. why would you constantly call them stupid, childish, etc? The seme sure is patient...
The brother didn't really bother me much, typical annoying know-it-all older brother.
I just wish the uke would realize the semes feelings. Doing nice things for other people is fine but also recognize your partners feelings... yeah.... not a fan of the uke... but good story.
Why would you follow someone at night who clearly has some kind of grudge against you? I would have my guard up at all times...