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Because most or all sex interactions are rape or dubcon, there’s no character development and the story doesn’t really progress much in general. You’re free to enjoy it, tho. I’m following the story but it’s starting to get really predictable and boring ╮(￣▽￣)╭. This chapter finally made me a little bit curious, because now there’s some kind of plan to go after the villain.

i agree (〜￣△￣)〜

The chapters are too short and i think that's why there are so many but so little interesting situations cuz the sex scenes are up to 2-3 chapters and that's why there's no character development yet, also i think it's too soon for that. Maybe after all the secrets and kang's history is revealed then the character development will come.

Sorry, but I’ve read other stories that were similar in size and were much better in terms of character development in the same amount of chapters as this. But I get what you’re saying. I wasn’t complaining per se about the story, I was just explaining why a lot of people dislike it. For me, it’s not a complete dislike but it’s starting to get boring. I hope that it gets better when they go after the chairman and the secrets about him and many are revealed.

Yea i also get what you mean it's just maybe this story is more agressive than the ones you read or maybe just that's how the author likes it lmao. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
But anyway yea i'm pretty excited and can't wait for more.

It’s not necessarily more aggressive. I don’t mind all the sex, I actually read it because of it as well, it’s an yaoi after all, I’m just saying that in between all those sex scenes there’s little to nothing about story and character development. It’s a little frustrating because I really like rivals to lovers stories, so when I started this and there was that rivalry between them because one was a swimmer and the other was a baseball player I was really excited, but then it was just sex sex sex and now suddenly the uke wants revenge xD I hope the story develops further in the next chapters. I also want to know more about their friends, they seem interesting.

*67 count more accurately next time smh

I conclude that I still dont like the Nocton, but I'll reserve a spot for him later in the future once he ACTUALLY proves himself and become a better person ╮(￣▽￣)╭

Well, that's fair though. I agree with you too.
Actually at first, I thought he's too harsh and now I think FL should understand him. He deserves to be happy after all (=・ω・=)

They're just grumpy and judgy. Leave them be....

its actually pretty good

other than the fact he gets raped every chapter and expresses it as something that will end up feeling good...