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Jesus, why can this author not say anything without a million repeated internal monologues? The last 30 or so chapters felt so exhausting having them just repeat the same thoughts again and again and again. And I don't feel like anyone really talks or thinks like this? Sometimes I had to reread the chapter and go "wait what are you even saying, bro, what book of your heart, where did this train of thought begin?"
Was this a novel? Is it taking a lot out of a book or something? Am I just having a stroke from how dumb it all is?? (⊙∆⊙ )