beta
meh for me, uke has potential but seme is just bleak and toxic at the same time. Think gary stu but instead of having at least an ounce of likeability, the character dev went full throttle on just being despicable, possessive, and red flag, barely any development at all. Plot's also meh- the jinx basically started with some kind of blackmail from snotty brat seme when they were kids, then they grew up to hs which was when uke "liked" him back or something, uke got caught by seme's grandfather kissing seme, uke ran away, seme thought he was abandoned although their relationship wasn't actually established at that point. Years later, seme ruined a good match for uke coz he's a prick who wanted revenge, yada-yada couldn't finish it anymore, only made it past ch.40.
Apparently this one's ending was rushed because the author had health complications which I feel really sorry about, lots of creators are really into their work that their conditions do suffer for it. Though I sympathize on a personal level to the author and their struggle and I admit that I most probably won't be able to pull what they have done in this industry; as a reader, this work was not for me.