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Weep and eat dust those who give this a low rating just coz the bottom's not the buff dude, there's literally a gazillion of those works out there on top of Bara which feature like 90% of those character type that fr looks like they're just f'ing themselves lol. And if it's just boobs that you're after then why not just read straight hentai or futa, daheck's so good about lumps that look so inflated it might as well be tumor, I like the natural looking pecs for men and perky chests for women, but the beefy ukes or fls in most smuts really do have their tits hanging so low, it feels like it'll pop so hard when you prick it with a needle lmao.

I get that of course that's just ya'll preference, but these too are also our preference, twink bottoms tend to be whiny bitches most of the time, or simps, or annoying virginal pricks, a dominant one like this is a treat, just waiting for more chapters and hoping that the plot for this one is also good and not a let down.

That was so fricking sudden and unnecessary, if anything the seme's character profile usually go for the ghosting/silent treatment when hurt, most naturally happy-go-lucky people tend to be like that a lot irl since they're oblivious and and realizing that they'd been played would make them to want to cut contact with the object of their hurt/shame, NOT overpower them via SA (these usually occur with the repressed types instead), specially since there was absolutely no prior indicator showing him with violent tendencies (he's just built huge), my guy wasn't even the possessive/obsessive type before this fiasco, he was also open to talk to the uke's ex and was immune to his attempts at making him jealous saying the uke is still with him, he just got ticked when the ex changed gears by convincing him that the uke does not love HIM instead.

I dunno if it's the author or editor who had this bright idea but it definitely felt like a fish outta water chapter, and choosing that for a season finale when lots of readers can drop it? how bold. Anyway, I'll stick for a while with this and see how the author pull it off, Driver's high had a similar downpoint too and I was sure to drop it, but then it ended beautifully, hoping for the same redemption here.

- because what even were those conflicts and resolutions? it felt so sudden and unsatisfying, it even seemed like it didn't matter considering everything was resolved by the gramps in the background; also the angst part about the uke not wanting to drink the seme's blood did not make much sense coz it happened AFTER seme cried about the thought of him not being needed anymore.

Honestly felt like author just liked creating a BL about a vampire x hitman and enjoyed it too much then suddenly remembered that they have to give it some drama and plot so they just threw those things together lol, they could've just went full throttle with the fluff tho since it worked great, but then again it might've been the editor's choice too in order to serialize the story more, which makes sense now that there's apparently a second volume to this - I just hope that one has a better conflict/resolution arc.

Seme is too persistent and never gives up on uke, acted like a creep around him (w/c some readers might look past due to his face card) and was not reflective of his actions and implications to the other boy's life, and then he kinda blackmails him to answer his feelings or lose him as a friend. Uke is more realistic in terms of his reflection and realization (considering he was straight) but too fickle and sometimes oblivious, it's an odd blend of being strong headed and a pushover which does not work. Meh for me, not much chemistry for me to continue reading the sides. The novel might be better and give more insight to the development of their relationship tho.

It's so easy to pull a plot armor in order to have the main couple go all the way and they can defo draw smoking smut if they want to as well, BUT the author was really consistent with the lore and personality of the character that they made their physical contact a process, one that's still ongoing until the very end since the uke's constitution is really a unique one, there was no sudden exception, everything that they have, they worked for together - from gaining friends, to getting him used to arousal, they're so likeable.

I also like that though the side couple were given spotlight they never overshadowed the main one and was just on the sidelines all throughout, there's so much potential for them and I like their pairing as well. I do hope the author continues with a sequel for them (that way we also get a glimpse of the main couple in this story as a side couple instead hehe)

but I also can't help seeing the ML looking like the love-child of his aunt and that other Alpha friend in the sequel story LMAO, specially that last panel of him panting, yeah for sure that boy's the seme in this one (I know, I know the characters are underage now but it's fiction and we'd most likely see them grow eventually, plus it's Fargo cmon it'll be an even bigger plot twist if this actually continue to be shounen ai to the very end, IF it continues to have a regular run and not a short one like the sequel)

On another note, what was the author cooking by dragging back the maternal grandma to this plot? That character was and is a POS, her reconciliation attempt is not enough for the way she treated and left the MC's mom in the main story, and now she's getting chummy with the husband and son? should've ended her participation in the main story as is.

Also to the uploader who bulk released the chapters in one day, thank you so much for giving sustenance to plebs like me hahah.

check out author's other work-- Kikonsha Desu Kedo, Nani ka? the uke is beefy and has the same vibe as the 2nd ML here, even has the same character design, except his hair is darker and he has no mole, plus artstyle is a bit different since it's one of the author's earlier works. It's just a bit awkward and silly for me to see the younger version of his father as having a strong resemblance to the Main ML here LMAO.

It's a good read, I was just ticked off in the earlier volume with the constant sexual harassment and then justifying it as okay coz the victim doesn't realize it anyway like wtf? it's a good thing it was acknowledged, though there wasn't really much reflection on it and the plot just made it okay again by having the top confirm that he wasn't bothered by it in the end (lol how convenient). Still a good read though, I like that they match each other's freak and I also like how the author made the ex-wife an actual character and not just a mob or caricature of an "evil" woman in yaoi, I really like how supportive they are of each other even if their marriage did not work.

Also this work really prepped me for that plot twist on the author's other work-- Work Love Balance coz the second ML there is like an updated version of the uke here, from the character design to the temperament and playboy lifestyle, it made me assume that he's really gunning for the seme in that story and he'll probably be a bott that looks like a top, same as this one, which is what's revealed on the latest chapter! (except the position part, he's still implied as a top based on his prev partners)

Really tried to like it coz the sides are enticing based on the socmed posts on my feed, but the main story is whacked and forgettable, lots of running away with lukewarm reasoning, even when the seme literally assures uke of his feelings and desires, the mf uke still runs away like crap; it's just chasing arcs over and over but with not enough heavy reason to make it satisfying; sure at the beginning it makes sense when the seme said there can never be more between them, but even that was suddenly overturned and he became whipped almost overnight + the uke even says that he was also using the seme himself so like the chasing arc just felt meh overall, and it's really bad that the author did it multiple times for almost always the same reasons lol. Not much development for either leads, but someone out there might still enjoy it, just not me.

It makes it more immersive and fun to see the bts of how they came up with the story, also the chibi versions of the characters are cute too + the artstyle's so scruffy but animated that I'm loving it altogether.

This was a really fun and fulfilling read, there was an action-packed plot that was pulled with enough chapters; very likeable characters, the villain's motive was kinda meh but I noticed a lot of villain's motives even in classic westerns are actually meh (it's either revenge for their dead wife or to settle some yo momma insult between drunkards) so this fits in quite well with that vibe. The pair's chemistry is off the charts too, I like how it transitioned throughout the plot, or maybe it's just coz I like daddy x twink trope myself? ehe. Hoping the author will do a sequel, but the ending's pretty great as is too.

Also for anyone craving another western BL, I'm here to tell you there's another good one out there I just can't for the life of me remember the title. The top's a blonde cowboy and the bottom's a native indian, there was a cringe panel there were the bottom called the top his "golden wolf" or lion or something hahahahah, but aside from that it's another solid read that's set in the old west. If any of ya'll know it, hit it up on this topic.