I like the basic lore of the world tho there's not much plot; art's good, questionable morality that gets shrugged off coz of the world the plot takes place in i.e. the seme is a working adult and the uke is a literal minor, I think he's even a middle schooler based on his uniform, and tho the seme fights off the urge to succumb to the yumema uke, he eventually did (it'd be really surprising if he didn't, that might've made this better)
The uke is so unhinged, it's almost scary lol. Defo a yandere in the making. With that last chapter, the title makes sense and there's potential for a good plot too, but if we're basing just from the work as is, the story is basically nonexistent, good spicy scenes tho.
3.5, good prompts but execution is meh, it feels jumpy like the scenes suddenly cut to another and the dialogues and plot skip some parts. I couldn't connect with the characters and their drives, I only read the first pairing and skimmed through the rest, not for me.
nothing particularly wrong with it, just feels jumpy plot-wise, like the author wanted to create drama at some points but then opt not to. I couldn't care much for the characters nor their dynamic, altho they were drawn beautifully.
another properly done tsundere uke with good enough reason why he acts like that instead of just making him a jerk to the seme for no reason. Also, that sister of his is a scum, I like the seme's character the most, the adopted child grew up to be a tad creepy towards the uke considering he's his uncle and foster father, but I guess it's fine since he got himself a bf in the end.
I'm sorry I meant to like the comment but I accidently pressed dislike and mangago won't make me change it
And I agree with you, the sister is a piece of crap, she expects the child to choose her when she basiclly abondoned him for whatever reason and gave him to Hisui whose barely out of highschool and tight on money?
I get what the author was trying to pull, I really do, and the characters are fine enough. But the pacing for this work was just out of whack for me and the development felt skippy that I found it lukewarm in the end. Such a shame coz it's rare to find a sub top in yaoi that isn't also an overwhelming puppy seme type like this one.
Literally a pair of idiot couple, but unlike others with this dynamic where the couple has the same air-headed personality which explains them being oblivious, these two are actually polar opposites- the uke is a tsundere and the seme is a puppy type, but they're still both idiots in their own rights and could've prevented years of heartache by simply communicating properly. Very cute though and I like the drama, wasn't too angsty for me, also the character design from the couple in their 20s, to 30s, then 40s was just superb.
everyone gets their happy ending in this one and everyone is gay, not cringy tho and it's a cute read.
**Spoilers**
Basically it's two sets of twins - one set of brothers are the tops, and the other set the bottoms, both are paired with each other lol.
Wow, just wow. Scifi, fantasy, action, romance that doesn't feel forced, power couples all in one. Plot is fantastic, art is fantastic, everything went so well together, the only fault that I can find is that it's too short, I feel like the author wanted to put more and they could've definitely expanded but then got tired and settled for shorter chapters which is why the last few ones felt rushed and everything was just resolved by the other side characters. I dunno why, but it's still good, didn't feel like too much of a deus ex machina, probs due to the background building in the earlier chaps so the plot progression and resolution still makes sense. All in all, this work is really an anti-thesis to those webcomics with very slow pacing, this one's very quick and efficient in its resolutions, it's tagged as Shounen Ai, but there's one graphic seggz scene between the main couple, only once though, just a heads up for those who has aversion to smut for some reason.
3/5 wishy washy, uke has a glow-down (character-wise), seme has no personality except being handsome and possessive, gets handed everything and never really struggles. Art is good.