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spacesapphire created a topic of Written in the stars
Hmm

I don’t understand why the grape scenes are so long, to me it’s not the grape thats the problem. Grape happens its a heavy topic and should be written with care and asking authors to never include it is just asking for censorship which I hate HOWEVER it doesn’t have to drawn this graphically for the reader to get the point the ML is being graped and abused. the author draws full or half chapters of just him getting graped, who wants to see an entire chapter of grape unless you have some sort of fetish? Like just move on with the story already it’s bad writting to keep doing this.