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It was amazing how the twists were handled in the initial chapters given the set-up, but it all went down-hill after chapter 10, just rape. Disappointing. Had hopes for this one, it was going so well, it could've been much more, but it just resorted to rape to show them together for the following 10 chapters 11-20
The jock bottom and soft top dynamics are good but there could've been more touching. It was just penetration and some kissing. That's if it is an only sex yaoi. There's not much to the story itself.