I'm more towards novel writing cause I can't draw to save my life, but some pointers-
If you want to bypass the cringe- imagine the actions in real life. Are these actions that people would actually do? Or is it more something you see in anime/manga/etc.?
Dialogue is another huge factor- overexplaining something, especially something a character ...... reply
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