Salut's Favorite

I re-read from the beginning since it’s been a while and *phew*. I don’t normally complain about poor translations, but I feel like I’m misunderstanding A LOT of crucial dialog that’s making the actions and motivations of the characters unclear. The FL falling and the commanders not helping her, then getting in trouble….wtf was going on? The FL is weirdly compliant and no one seems bright, but the jumbled MTL’d dialog isn’t helping that. If you’re going to use MTL, do a little editing please.

What was with the flashback that the peeping Tom was having? The one with Yujin telling him that he would only fuck him once? Then the guy thought it was weird to see Yujin clinging and whining for Aaron when he used to be “top” before. Was he maybe one of Yujin’s former one night stands but Yujin didn’t recognize him or what?