One thing that omegaverse stories often lack is romance, i think. The plots basically skip over any normal relationship milestones so that makes it harder to build up chemistry.
Case in point, the last line of this chapter, “you will only be having sex with me” is kinda dry in my opinion.
Idk if yall have read this, but this is one example of an omegaverse that HAS CHEMISTRY (its pretty short tho). Halfway thru it, I forgot it was an omegaverse. Infact its a shonen ai, which is crazy
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/kasegimasen_kara/
At this point, when the main characters go out for drinks i just hang my head. I feel like it’s a lazy way to get the plot going, boooring. Not to mention, the degree of drunkenness is just silly, if you are getting blackout drunk with memory loss involved, that’s actually a sign of brain damage, that’s not ordinary after work drinking, that’s advanced stomach-pumping drinking, lmao.
Those are some CRAZY eyes.