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Didn’t expect that Raymond would confess so soon, in the novel he didn’t confess until later. (But then again the story has been changing scenes from the novel)

I honestly think the concept and the two main characters are cute. But I can see why people complain about the lack of chemistry. I honestly think it comes down to the art. Apparently those who read the novel said the chemistry was better there. I think the artist has a pretty art style but I can see where their strength and weakness is. Their strength is making beautiful faces and their weakness is anatomy/body posing. Now props to the artist because in general anatomy is like one of the top hardest things to work on. But it’s true that it’s hard to ignore in this manhwa. When looking at close up art on their faces, it looks perfectly fine. But when there’s a panel showing the torso and arms, it looks awkward and their bodies look smaller. It’s very apparent when the ML and FL stand next to each other and you’re looking at their side profiles.

Along with the intimate skinship such as hugging, the art of the bodies look stiff and comes off as awkward which many believe is the source of it looking like there’s no chemistry and looks unnatural. Like chapter 88 when ML is holding her cheek and has a hand on her waist, there’s so much space and his right arm is non-existent. Chapter 90, when they’re hugging each other you can see their bodies look off. And when he has her hand on her shoulder in another panel, FL’s body shrinks and her arms look so much tinier. Anyways I’m not trying to bash the artist, I’m just pointing out details as to why the art may giving off stiffness and that can rub off onto the feel of the character’s relationships. I still give props to the artist since making a comic is hard work and exhausting, I don’t expect superior art and consistency in every single panel. It’s the reason why so many smaller authors/artists on w3 b to0ns discontinue their work, it’s a draining and stressful job lol.

Just started reading this (only on chapter 2 rn) and ngl I’m pretty tired of the dumb af mom trope. Her logic is so stupid. She’s crying over the fact that she chose to leave him in order not to hurt him knowing she doesn’t have long to live- but she also proceeds to directly hurt him anyways by leaving??? He’s hurt both ways no matter what. She also doesn’t think about the awful situation she put her child in by leaving and knowing damn well, dragons don’t accept humans/getting together with humans. She KNEW she didn’t have long to live but chose to go to a dangerous environment shunned by her kind for her kid. So she basically was ready to leave her kid there. She made the situation way worse by making that bad impression on the father, and thus already making a rift between father and child both in bad understandings and no relationship for years. She basically created an even bigger problem for everyone just to die and leave the problem for everyone else to solve. I honestly think an interesting plot would to have those “run away mother” survive and actually face the consequences of how dumb their decisions are. Also be lectured by their own kid for their stupidity. Like GIRL you are part of the issue for your failure in relationship.

I couldn’t find anymore chapters on this but according to Baka updates, this is a complete 3 chapter volume? It was made back in 2017. Apparently it continues in another series under a different title named: Undergrand Hotel: Spell on You. Started in 2024. The status says there’s 6 volumes and that the focus is now on Sen’s POV of this situation. There’s no translation though.

I can already tell that the police won’t be called and the stalker won’t go to jail simply because mc tries to understand and be friends with the stalker after the stalker talks about their feelings and cries and supposedly turns over a new leaf.
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At this rate mc may be a shoujo FL that treats everyone with kindness lmao

It’s pretty funny how on tt there’s two groups that think differently about this manhwa. One group that hyped this story up by talking about it and making edits. And the other group that’s absolutely enraged at seeing the hype and proceeded to trash this story while comparing it to several regular romance manhwas. Literally saw a post rating manhwa and they put all historical romance manhwa highly, and added this single manhwa at the end rating it low. It’s no wonder since they keep trying to compare regular fluffy romance to a SMUT. They’re like “this story is trash! I read quality content like veil and other beautiful historical manhwa!!”

Looks like they’re changing and adding more conflict into the manhwa than what was originally in the novel. I can see why since it’s possible some novel readers may have thought the story is too light and has little actual conflict, but I’m also conflicted because I didn’t mind it having little conflict. It stood out that way compared to other stories that used drama as their main source to keep readers entertained.

The black haired saintess was NEVER a problem at all in the novel. She was hardly involved with the main characters and was more like a side character whose info of her ending was thrown in at the end. It was never relevant and never caused any problem for the FL. I don’t even remember the saintess having a thought about sabotaging anything going on between blondie and FL because FL was always finding ways to get away from him anyways. It feels like they’re adding more interactions between blondie and FL to make blondie worse than he already was in the novel. In the novel blondie was delusional and annoying asf but he was tame by simply being delulu and clingy until near the end where he got more pushy and stepped over boundaries. He’s getting pushier sooner in the manhwa. Also they added more scenes of Kylo and blondie fighting here with that watching play scene, and added the revised scene of FL going with blondie instead when she originally went with Kylo to the ball in the novel.

There’s really no point in hiding that she’s actually a girl. Her mother’s reasoning for lying about the MC’s gender was simply because she was afraid she’d attract danger for being favored by the emperor for being his only daughter. But that point literally is shown as the emperor favors the mc openly already yet nothing happened. Even the mom admitted that it should be time to reveal the truth soon.

It’s the fact that everyone excluding the mom knows the actual truth and everyone truly believes mc is a boy but just looks cute dressed as a girl and lets it be.

Dang B&TO readers are insufferable. I tried reading it over there and they somehow blamed the ML and bashing him for what happens in the first two chapters. They were mad he was upset at the thought of her being with many men before and thinking she’s like a slut. But she fr made him think that way by immediately initiating sexual stuff with him in the office and saying she has been with many dudes. He didn’t even think that way until after she purposefully acted like that. And they’re blaming him for thinking about it. Despite this literally being the role reversal of those other FLs who feel anxious when thinking about the playboy MLs past. They just hate the man at this point no matter what he does.

I might have missed something so correct me if I’m wrong but I don’t remember seeing a reason for why Dia is so adamant about believing her own father will kill her. It just doesn’t make sense to me? I don’t remember seeing any signs he had that intent. And logically it also doesn’t benefit him in any way, if anything it would be a loss for him. Because he doesn’t have any other child to take over, so losing his only heir/daughter would be a loss. And the fact that he believes his daughter is useful by marrying her off and connecting the families, so why would he give that up by killing her?

Anyways I don’t feel bad for dia. She made her own choices that way. She admitted it that she didn’t trust eiser enough. She physically couldn’t even TALK to him and see him when he struggled. So he was there for her when she was getting high on drugs through a rough time but the moment he goes through something she couldn’t do the same and was too focused on herself. My question is, if she had gotten her goal by marrying victor with her family situation and was successful would she be as unhappy and unsatisfied? I’m convinced she’s only acting like this now because she failed in decision making and it didn’t go well for her. I believe if she successfully reached her goal using victor she would be very satisfied and content with her decision (but still greedy for more once she sees eiser happy without her). I also wonder if eiser had not become successful and was still at at a low point in his life and was weaker than victor, would she even bother considering staying or going back to him? Or she only wants to be with him now BECAUSE of the addition that he’s successful?