This story gets boring after the ex-husband and the mistress incidents get resolved. Afterwards, it becomes a slice-of-life series where the Countess gets involved in one issue after another with none of it is pertaining to the main premise of the story. While I applaud the author in tiding up the main part of the story in several chapters, I can't condone this meandering plot that comes later. It feels like it doesn't have any substance and the author is reaching for drama just to make a quota. You wrapped it up. Now let it go author-nim.
Seeing all the hate for Jina/Shae in the comments breaks my heart. I'm enjoying her character and herself as a true otome otaku. I just want her to have the realization that because her brother changed his character, and the game's potential MLs, the true endgame is a BL finale.
Story stop pop-blocking me!! I need my Daddy and daughter reunion!! Also also, I'm starting to slide to the Team Yayul side.
U mean the guy who killed her right, same here
I decided to read it since the title was interesting, but I wasn't expecting to enjoy it this much. The artwork is a little crude, but the plot and characters more than make up for it. Mai trying so hard to not be a victim and to prevent her indifferent brother from becoming a murderer awoke a new feeling within him. Honestly, I wouldn't mind it if the plot got darker, instead of playing in the lighter shades of grey. I feel this sort of story with the brother requires that dip into the dark side of humanity.
My only wish is that Makoto gets Mai :) that he actually do be together with her in his hell. She likes him, he loves her, she doesn't want him to kill, he can't kill unless it's her and even then, he just wants her. It's a good match if you ask me. So just let the boi obsess over her, she will receive it all, happily if I am not reading her wrong(she gets happy when he turned that girl down, the og her alsp loved him, she also loves him and doesn't really care for other's even to the point of defending her bro ~yes... I kinda feel a bit weird, cause they are not really brother and sister [not even how each other sees one another...] but he definitely uses the term to be around her and control her surroundings to catch/trap her to be with him[which is funny cause she kinda wants to be with him, to distract him from his killing intent and also cause she enjoys his company and cares for him genuinely]...)
So I do think albeit not perfect, most things are not, they are a good match
The art isn't crude, it's just stylised. You can tell it's drawn by a highly skilled artist. If it's not to your taste, that's fine though! I'm glad you're enjoying the characters though.
The idea behind the plot is great and original. But the flow and execution of the plot idea is done poorly. And why is the FL always being saved?! She had such guts in the beginning, but turned into another typical damsel-in-distress. For someone who does kendo for a hobby/exercise she sure didn't think about using any of her points to increase her stamina. I was really hoping, by the thumbnail, that FL would run-a-way and come back as an assassin or something similar. Well, she escaped, but that's about it. Potential wasted. (︶︿︶)
This a long and boring snooze fest. The slap was the best part that I've read so far. I keep hoping something more interesting will happen, but I've been let down. Yes, Ophelia died; yes, Emilia loved her; yes, the 3 guys miss O and kinda missed E too; Yes, New O doesn't want to be a stand in for the Dead O...blah, blah, blah...if there isn't at least 2 letters I wouldn't be too shocked. （￣へ￣）Zzzzz....
This translation is bad due to them translating it from Korean to Arabic to English. I gave them a 50% pass based upon that alone, but if your English isn't good enough then ask for a proofreader or perhaps stop at translating into a language you're more proficient at.
Also, I tried posting where to read a better translation based off of the first chapter and MG bots keep deleting my comments. （￣へ￣）
Can I get the link??
I tried posting it twice, but MG bots won't let it go through. I also tried sending it to you through MGs mail system, too. If that fails just search for it on Bato.
MG is not letting me post it in any form or any reference to the alternate website. I tried several times and it's not going through their firewall. But if you do a search on the name you'll find on a website "B" that has it.
Thank you i will try (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Sent you an mail; hopefully, that got through to you. (●'◡'●)
it did work THANKS!!!!
The story is interesting and the artwork is very soft...however, it bugs me. The FL is supposed to be young and vibrant, but she looks like a middle-aged woman in most of her depictions even her pre-isekai awakening flashbacks she doesn't look mid-twenties. I think once at the orphanage she kinda looked young. As for the ML he (to my eyes) isn't that pretty/handsome/cute as the story raves. He's all right but that's about it. Whenever, I see his face all I can see is a little boy playing grown-up in his father's clothes. He looks awkward most of the time and less like a war hero beauty. That said I'll keep reading and perhaps the shiny eyes will finally drag me into them. (︶︿︶)
I think the OgAyla was like that at some point... but mc seemed pretty mature in both lives.
Also I agree that most of them look old. I atribut that to author trying to give them that aegyosal? that oriental "eyebag" that has been trending for some time. It would probably work with normal art ans drawn closer to the eyes. But this art style makes them look very "westerny", which makes sense with the "western monarchy" setting, but mashes really badly with that undereye thing... because on us... that just looks like old age wrinkles + fat... we don't associate it with youth and smiling eyes like them... so to us its... kinda ugly and makes them look older. Istg I thought they were all around 30~40 when I started reading... xD
And about Frede... its the cheeks! Because the eyes are smaller their cheeks look bigger (which makes worse contrast with the eye thingy) and in Frede makes him look like he has those "babyfat" cheeks and rounder jawline than normal art male leads... whick makes lim look less manly and not so much a heartthrob but a teen cutie? Characteristics wise he should look like Cárcel from broken ring, blond, blue eyed, handsome, strong and very popular with women... but with this art he somehow falls short... to the point Ayla seems way more attractive than him.
And to be honest... I think the emperor is better looking... xD