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I highly enjoyed watching the FL battle against the chosen of the Evil Robot System. Too bad it got destroyed. I was hoping to finally see a battle with more of its functions unlocked other than the basics of beauty enhancement and hypnosis.

For this new arc, I really don't want the FL to take down the Fish Actress, I want her brother to do it. Of course, he can get help from the FL, but I want him to deal out the final blow. Then I want him to find his own love interest.

I also can't believe that this wealthy woman has fallen so easily for this reverse honey-trap. Not to doubt anything is unbelievable. She has money and resources and refuses to use it to investigate the intentions around her. She should at least talked to her former crush about that incident. Ugghhh....Grandmother Cen was handing out common sense and the this one ran off to play with butterflies.

While reading some previous comments, I see we are all in agreement that a blond mom and a redhead dad don't make a black-hair child. Genetics.

I hadn't read this story in a while, I had actually stopped in the 70s somewhere, so I started back over from the beginning. Dude...the story is fire and the MC is a ruthless arm collector!! Darn cliffhangers...

But...the translation posted here is trash...well up until chapter 100 it's good since it's Reaper's translation, but afterwards the translations suck, so I went to Asura's site to finish reading it. And I suggest others do the same as some of these translations just translate words leaving out the making sense part like grammar and sentence structure.

Ya know MC for a person who has played zombie survival games and now thinks that his latest game has become reality, you are thinking some foolish thoughts about zombies. It's not murder if you're defending yourself from being some undead's lunch or being killed. Thankfully, you have the NK defector there to help straighten out your mind, otherwise I was about to start thinking being around the FL so long has made you stupid.

The FL is stupid. You don't plan to run away and then stick around to see your rapist triumphant return from battle. The minute his foot left the palace, yours should have been right behind him. Take some jewels; changed your name; cut/dye hair and be out to a place far far away from the palace. Nope!! You stuck around and ended up being violated again. And when the ML was asleep did you even run?? Nah, just sat outside and watched the scenery like an idiot. You didn't even try to escape -- you may not have gotten out of the city, but you could have laid low in the city's ghetto. Yes, you're traumatized by ML2's death, but that doesn't mean you give up wanting to escape!! I despise that the FL has somewhat accepted her lot in life and refuses to fight back. PMO!! (Unfortunately, this story reminds me of another, but at least that FL had the guts to run away multiple times.)

The ML is trash!! And the author is unbelievable in thinking anybody in this modern age will want to see an HEA between a rapist and a victim. The only way to make this story right is for it to end in a tragedy!! Dropped!!

Interesting read so far but I have one major gripe: MC is the author of the novel that he got isekai'd into, but, yet, he doesn't know anything about the demonic world he created or barely anything about his almost-ultimate villain?? Did he not flesh-out his villain or his motives?? Yeah, the author-MC, later clarifies he concentrated more on the heroes, but this is still your story and your villain is half-demon, so you don't know anything??

Now to the half-demon MC: I'm guessing he's between 16-18 years old. Grew up as a noble (??) in the human world judging from his home, so he didn't have any loyal servants to help him with his escape or to escape with him? Not one?? Did they all betray him?? Sad.

But now he's in the Demon Realm posing as a guard -- does he not have any demonic family? I know an ancestor of his committed treason and sided with the humans, but does that mean the whole family decided betrayal was the way to go?? I think it would be interesting to see if the MC had any demon family left and their reaction to seeing him.

Until this latest chapter, I was tempted to dump this story because of its meandering plot. No matter how pretty the artwork is it doesn't compensate for a lackluster story line. The FL drifts between annoyingly insipid to a dominating performance, but even with those short bursts of personality, the story is going nowhere fast. It keeps circling around boredom and I'm on the verge of dropping it. I feel like I'm foolishly waiting for something interesting to happen, but the joke is on me as this story isn't in any way heading towards a true plot.

This is off to a good start. But....if I was the MC, I would have abandoned the FL quickly. All she knows how to do is nag, cry, and act high-and-mighty. I understand this is an unprecedented event and your nerves are high and you're running scared, but you don't treat your savior like trash just because he's not in your financial lane. He saved your butt when he didn't have to open that door. And then you go and shout in the midst of a zombie outbreak when you know noise and movement attracts them??...I would have abandoned her so fast!! She's lucky MC grabbed her to run!!

Hopefully the FL's character will start to develop soon as the severity of the situation finally sinks into her brain. Also, why did she put back on the shorts?? She was at MC's house and couldn't find any pants to protect her legs from scratches and potential bites??

I'm dropping this one and it's not because the MC is ugly -- that would be rude.

Nope, I'm dropping this because the story is boring. I don't mind an OP MC, in fact, I enjoy reading MCs who are highly OP, but the story has to be interesting. This story has accomplished making the most boring OP MC ever now that he's reborn as a noble. It probably would have been better had he stayed a war orphan and we witnessed his rise in ranks and abilities. Even the hatching of the egg, which took 8 years, was boring. It would have been better to have the egg hatch in the dormitory causing a small disruption and then taking the animal to his sister's laboratory and using the doppelganger tool his other sister gave him after he established himself at school.

Honestly, I think I would have liked the story more, and it would make more sense, if MC was reborn in noble family that had familial ties to ancient magic. As it is now, his connection to ancient magic is random given his new family, which so far have no such historical connections.

Lastly, I don't like that the potential FL is the daughter of the man who killed MC in his previous life. It's fine if the MC doesn't dwell on this issue, but she should stay a friend and never be considered as a potential love interest. Never.

I actually made up my mind to drop this series around chapter 11, but decided to speed-read the rest of the chapters in hopes the story would get better. It doesn't. :-(

I was waiting for the FL to divorce her husband. -- Never happens. I thought they were going to lean into being a singer from her former life and using this talent to break-free and earn her own way in life. NOPE!! (In fact it's not brought up again -- performance wise.)

While the plot of this story is a popular trope used in many others this one doesn't use it well. FL is only after saving her life and she never considers the life of the OGFL at all. (Sad!!) Why the poor girl was angry, stand-offish, or basically anything about her life before she took control of the body. I thought they would write in a hidden diary, so we [the readers] and FL could learn about the thoughts that plagued the OGFL when she was basically sold to an invading empire for a contractual marriage for peace.

Honestly, I was looking forward to the divorce and her using her singing talents to fund her new life as she couldn't do in her previous life. Instead we're left with some baby-mama-daddy drama. :-(

With even just 3 chapters this was near darn perfect!! My only gripe is I wanted to see the best friend's repercussions and not just disappearing into the night and having her parents pay her debt. She has to pay her dues too!!