The flow of the story is horrible and the plot holes, omg, the plot holes. I could forgive a few plot holes but this many right at the initial stages of the story? The premise is interesting though.
I'm sorry but this story is like those annoying story adds on Instagram.
The details in the art are so clever. The changes in crystal are subtle and progressive.
He's a kid. He's going to think he's an adult. Why the heck are you offering him a woman to become an adult?and what the heck is with the romance. Atleast make him 18.
The second story didn't have enough emotional depth, they do not seem convincing as a couple in love, the first story feels incomplete and more importantly both the stories are based on dub con.
I'm so so so glad, that the author stood by ayden and daichi pairing. Every other pairing pales in comparison.