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Fuckkk fuckkk i hate everyone in this story i fucking hate lister that fucking rapist shitty shiball and the sister for being so fucking blind to her brother evil vile personality being completely ignorant to a person pain is abuse too and the lyod the fuck is wrong with everyone in this story like you literally saw him with bruises and limping and it didnt occur to you that its not just a coincidence or he suddenly triping fuck everyone is so frustrating is make my blood pressure high (╬￣皿￣)凸 (╬￣皿￣)凸

Here to complain again...am I the only one that don't like enemies to lovers...I just don't understand how a guy can fall in love with someone that did something so cruel and wicked to them.Like I try to guilt trip myself into liking it but I just can't support bad bad people become good because what you did is forgivable but not forgotten.

Here to complain about how bad popular BLS are like, I rlly feel like mostly girls read dat and fetishize it thinking it's ok.We should put more positive and non toxic BLS at the front instead of bad writing, weird plot lines and toxicity.

Am I the only one that feels like the writing in BLS now a days is sloppy.Same trope over and over...things always happen and there is no build up to that.Like, these authors need to do better and be original and not copy what's trending... I'm tired of it!!

I think its time we create bls where the uke isnt some naive simple guy who gets disgraced by the seme or ml until they fall in love. I see that bl stories often take inspiration from the typical stereotypes of straight relationships where the women or feminine figure is often treated as someone who doesn't know anything, is small, fragile and naive and having to depend on some stupid dominant toxic or cold guy. I just hate this troupe of stories alot. The uke just simply chose to forget traumatic events from the past and forgive the ml cause damn apparently maybe now its a misunderstanding cause he has fallen in love with the seme. But u cannot forget such things especially when they are issues that drove u to the edge of death, he should have asked and questioned him and got it cleared out. And idk how it works but straight men ain't shifting their freaking sexuality just because they find someone attractive. Ur either gay or bi there are no straight guys that likes other guys. Maybe could have gone with pan or something but idk that's not how it really works. Plus the seme was at a freaking gay bar and got mad when he was questioned. I think that explains something about his preferences, cause u don't accidentally walk into gay bars unless ur a dumb fuck. Every freaking bl has straight guys falling in love with each other. You mean them discovering their sexualities? . Idk maybe it woukd have been batter if it was unlabeled too but straight?? i agree with alot of comments. The seme showed no emotions or anything. Maybe an explanation as to how he fell in love or when he started liking him would have been nice. I was expecting something like maybe the seme fell for the uke back when they were in uni and got upset because uke was dating the toxic ass ex. But nope. Ik it was supposed to be a slow burn love story but from where the relationship is at rn it doesn't feel very grounded or secure. They aren't honest with their feelings, never said i love you, always being indirect with their feelings with some stupid lines and metaphors, idk anymore. Like BFFR. Where is the chemistry. Constant arguing is not chemistry. Also just because the seme is higher up and dominant doesn't mean he has to win or should always be right. That's now how real life works. Atleast show us the semes pov and his breakdowns and frustrations. We only hear 2nd or 3rd person povs when it comes to his emotions like Jaehwan saying hes angry. We never see him express sadness or whatsoever. I don't think being a seme means u need to be cold all the time and show no emotions. This is something that should be applied to alot of bl stories.. Its not weak to show ur weakness or to cry or break down. I find it really attractive when guys are able to express their emotions well without always bring cold or having some sort of superiority complex. Its like i dont care but i still want you. There are people with avoidant attachment styles but not every single story has to be that tbh. A relationship should always have effort from both sides. It was weird when he kept inviting the uke to places at specific times but not showing up and then telling him something else when he calls. That's kind of devaluing, to him as a person and also his time. And he be disappearing with no explanations to random places, maybe atleast let him explain where he is going or something. He didn't seem like he cared or he gave a fuck unless he was horny at the office or something. Idk i felt sm 2nd hand embarrassment throughout the storyline for the mc. The story could have been done better honestly. It was very rushed and u can't do that when discussing about mental traumas and deep shit.