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Ik everyone is saying this but the last 10 or so chapters were way too rushed. Libertia's and Alisha's backstory is interesting and finally something original coming from a villainess story, but there was no need to forcefully fit the whole "destroy house vanus" arc (so the climax of the whole story) AND the big plot twist into 10 chapters.
Could've easily been a 20 chapter arc. Felt like there was a lot of info dumping with little time to understand and process the things that are happening, especially with that part where sue was in a dream world. That point should've been at least one whole chapter, before Mc met Libertia.
The whole feeling this was meant to give off just kinda dissappeared when the story progression was like "Let's kill them! Oh no Daniel don't die, I'll kill you uncle! 3 years passed now and I always thought of you sister, now we're back to killing uncle with my unexplained spirit power. Omg I'm actually your twin? Thanks for the body, Anyway now me and Daniel (who got stabbed two times and poisoned but somehow still fought and survived) have an unnamed child that's actually my sis. The end". Yk what I mean? This all happened in literally 10 chapters.
The Art was really amazing but that's why that arc should've gone on for a few more chapters, rather than what we got.