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You know, aside from the HEAVY rape in this book, it was really good in the beginning, some parts were a bit hit or miss but nevertheless I enjoyed it. Until before the whole time skip.
It was absolutely garbage, first off his brother was just tragically removed right as he woke up and I felt like that was all so pointless??? Not to mention that Gramps was supposed to be "renowned" and just up and died so fucking easily??? Like instead of removing his foot breaking the chain would have made so much more sense??? If he taught MC to literally like LITERALLY uproot a whole ass tree what tf is a chain around his foot gonna fucking do???? Dude was supposed to be like "WHOA he was in this secret military shit during WWII" and he just fucking up and died??????? I understand Uruma freezing while confronting his biggest demon, but literally gramps?????? Author is just taking shit out if their ass cause they wanted this to be longer, it could have been appropriately paced and very satisfying and sweet, but nah.
NOT TO MENTION LITERALLY KYOU. Who tf is this bitch?? He literally has the biggest fucking hard on for Uruma like??? He makes 0 fucking sense it's one thing to be a literal psychopath and it's another to be edging yourself to this shit okay?? It was good, it had potential, author is really fucking weird with all this rape shit, it got to the point I was like skimming over it.
Also, I feel like it was a crime against Uruma's character to turn him into a killer and murder the cop, honestly, like the whole point was to kill those who deserved it, the revenge. But the cop? He literally did nothing and even while witnessing the horror of Uruma and the dead body he still felt nothing but empathy and pity for the boy, wishing he could have saved him, that if he did more Uruma may have not become this way. I just feel like that was spitting on Uruma as a whole tbh, I understand that he couldn't have witnesses and shit like that, but that just gave me a sour taste in my mouth.
Though on a positive note, the art did improve a lot!