
ch 5 had more plot twists than a twizzler.
also plot hole in the main story: at the stairs taira smelled the other dude and asked the actual crush sitting there if dark haired boy was just there, which was true. But if he actually had such superior sense of smell, Taira should have smelled crush there stronger and it shouldnt have been a faint scent as if someone had just left. They werent that far from each other!!

This story has ALL of the shoujo and BL stereotypes. Traumatic childhood? Check. Prince type saves uke? Check. Lotsa non consenual rapey stuff? Check. Family is against their relationship? Check. Seme is too manly to express his love via words? Check. Even the art gets more shoujo as the story progresses. (Even the side stories have cliche plots... at least there was 1 GL couple...) Im not saying that this is all bad, it clearly satisfied many readers and has a good rating.

About the first story.. it was cute but I have 2 problems: 1. How's it that they lost contact for 6 years when they were best friends in hs? I guess Asahi could have moved away and not have the technology to communicate with him, but for how very close they seemed it's odd. 2. They let Masaki, a 5-year-old, go to the other kid's house on his own??
lol this story isnt good at all and pulls out all of the possible cliches that existed ever. It has pretty art tho and the ads look like promising works tho (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜